Question

中央号召创建节约型社会，可是在许多校园浪费现象严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。
要点提示：
1. 不良习惯：浪费水、电、食物等；
2. 危害：增加父母经济负担，浪费自然资源；
3. 制止浪费的措施：（由自己设想）。
注意：1.词数100左右，演讲的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2.不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
May I have your attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.
___________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.

Answer 1

Dear friends,
May I have your attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.
Nowadays, there is a lot of waste on campus. Many students fail to eat the foods they have ordered and throw away the leftovers into the dustbin. Others leave the lights on in the daytime. Still, water taps are sometimes left running. These bad habits not only lead to a waste of the world’s natural resources but also add to financial burden of their parents.
It is high time that we should deal with the problem. But what can we do? In my opinion, it is everyone’s duty to fight against waste. First, make it a rule to save food. Secondly, remember to turn off the lights and taps.
Let’s take action! I’m sure, with everyone doing their bit, we will make a difference.
Thanks for listening.

解析试题分析：本文的写作首先对现在校园的浪费现象进行描述。许多的学生不能吃完他们点的食物并且随意的丢弃它们fail to eat the foods they have ordered and throw away the leftovers into the dustbin.一些学生白天不关灯Others leave the lights on in the daytime.还有水龙头也不能及时的关掉water taps are sometimes left running.然后发表自己的看法，从两方面进行阐述，首先要将节约食物制定为规则，及时的关灯或是水龙头。最后发表号召，相信如果每个人都行动起来，肯定能带来不同I’m sure, with everyone doing their bit, we will make a difference.文章中适当使用虚拟语气句式来增强文章的可读性，如It is high time that we should deal with the problem.是做某事的关键时候了。
考点：提纲类写作
点评：提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写。学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思。在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，如when it comes to当谈到，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体。