Question

中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。

注意：1．词数150左右；演讲的开头和结尾已写好，不记人总词数。

2．不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。

浪费现象	危害	措施
1．水、电。 2．餐厅的食物。 3．其他(由考生自己添加)	1．自身性格。 2．父母财政负担。 3．自然资源	(内容由考生自己添加)

Dear friends,

May I have your attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.

With the improvement of living standard, there are a lot of waste on campus. For example the students

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Therefore, I’m sure, with everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation the better.

That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

May I have your attention, please? Now I'd like to make a speech here.

With the improvement of living standard, there are a lot of waste on campus. For example,the students leave the lights on in the daytime, water running after washing and remains of a lotof food after eating on the table. Some of the students even ask their parents for pocket money.So it is high time that we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows:

In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence on their owncharacter. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not the least, it also exhausts the world's very limited natural resources, water and electricity.

But how to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it is everybody's business to fight againstwaste. On one hand, I should start with myself to save everything. On the other hand, I'd like toremind my friends here to lake the lead in reducing the waste.

Therefore, I'm sure, with everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation for the better.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等

【亮点说明】 the students leave the lights on in the daytime, water running after washing and remains of a lotof food after eating on the table. 这句话用了宾语补足语，So it is high time that we had to deal with the problem这句话用了it is high time…句型， the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence on their own character.这句话用了have a bad influence on sth对…有坏的影响， it is everybody's business to fight againstwaste. 这句话用了it做形式主语， I'd like to remind my friends here to take the lead in reducing the waste. 这句话有remind sb of sth提醒某人某事， I'm sure, with everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation for the better.这句话用了with复合结构，还有文章使用 In the first place, Secondly, Last but not the least,Therefore, On one hand,On the other hand, In my opinion,这些关联词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查提纲式作文