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【题目】目前,高中学生之间经常会举办很多聚会，如生日、节日等。对此现象，人们表达了不同的观点. 请根据下面表格的信息，给某英语报社写一篇文章，阐述两种不同的观点并谈谈自己的看法.

支持的理由：1.增进友谊，加深感情；2.交流学习心得；3.放松心情；

反对的理由：1.浪费时间；2.浪费金钱；3.存在安全问题；

自己的观点…

注意：1.词数：150词左右。

2.文中不出现真实姓名和校名。

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Nowadays, senior high school students often have parties together on birthday or festivals, which has aroused heated discussions. Should we do things like this? Here are people’s opinions in detail.

Some people support parties among students, for having parties with classmates can deepen friendship. At parties they can exchange learning experience or just have a relax. That is to say, they regard parties as a way to temporarily get rid of pressure from schoolwork. And the others that are opposed to it think it’s totally a kind of waste of time and money. Besides, as teenagers usually hold parties after evening and some may even involve wine, the security issues are what makes people worried. In their eyes, student’s parties are meaningless and unnecessary.

In my opinion, it’s cool to have parties, but we should do it right, which means obeying those unwritten rules and behaving properly.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生陈述有关高中生举行聚会的两方面观点，并总结自己的看法。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 提出话题

2. 分别陈述两种观点

3. 总结自己的观点

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

senior high school students；have parties；support；be supposed to do；waste；relax；friendship；security issues

第三步：连词成句

1. Nowadays senior high school students often have parties together.

2. People have different opinions on it.

3. Those who support parties think they can deepen friendship through parties.

4. It can also give chances to exchange learning experience and relax.

5. Those who are opposed to parties think it’s a waste of time to have parties.

6. In my opinion, we should have parties reasonably, just not too much.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改