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Nowadays, senior high school students often have parties together on birthday or festivals, which has aroused heated discussions. Should we do things like this? Here are people¡¯s opinions in detail.
Some people support parties among students, for having parties with classmates can deepen friendship. At parties they can exchange learning experience or just have a relax. That is to say, they regard parties as a way to temporarily get rid of pressure from schoolwork. And the others that are opposed to it think it¡¯s totally a kind of waste of time and money. Besides, as teenagers usually hold parties after evening and some may even involve wine, the security issues are what makes people worried. In their eyes, student¡¯s parties are meaningless and unnecessary.
In my opinion, it¡¯s cool to have parties, but we should do it right, which means obeying those unwritten rules and behaving properly.
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1. Nowadays senior high school students often have parties together.
2. People have different opinions on it.
3. Those who support parties think they can deepen friendship through parties.
4. It can also give chances to exchange learning experience and relax.
5. Those who are opposed to parties think it¡¯s a waste of time to have parties.
6. In my opinion, we should have parties reasonably, just not too much.
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