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4.以下为李华写给校长的有关学校体育设施等的一些建议.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Mr.President,
I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities in campus.I have notice that our university has very limited resources in term of opportunities to participate in sports.
It is known to all what sports are very important to young people.If they have access to quality sports facilities,young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle,to boost self-esteem and confidence,and to build a negative outlook and sense of achievement.
I suggest build a new playground,where should be designed for students with different interests.They should have a different section for each activity and available to students all year round.I believe sports area will meet our sporting needs.
Thanks for reading.
Yours faithfully
Li Hua.

分析 本文主要讲述作者给校长写信,建议学校修建一个新的运动场,添加一些体育设施,让学生们进行锻炼.

解答 Dear Mr.President,
I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities in campus.I have notice that our university has very limited resources in term of opportunities to participate in sports.
It is known to all what sports are very important to young people.If they have access to quality sports facilities,young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle,to boost self-esteem and confidence,and to build a negative outlook and sense of achievement.
I suggest build a new playground,where should be designed for students with different interests.They should have a different section for each activity and∧available to students all year round.I believe∧sports area will meet our sporting needs.
Thanks for reading.
详解:
1.in改为on 考查介词.on campus意为"在校园中",是固定搭配.
2.notice改为noticed 考查动词时态.have后接过去分词构成现在完成时态.
3.term改为terms 考查名词."in terms of"意为"就…而言",是固定短语.
4.what改为that 考查连词."that sports are very important to young people"是主语从句,it是形式主语.该从句结构意思完整,用that引导.
5.negative改为positive 考查形容词.根据句意:建立一个积极的人生观.用形容词positive,意为"积极的",negative意为"消极的".
6.build改为building 考查动名词.suggest意为"建议",后接动词时用动名词作宾语.
7.where改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词playground在从句中作主语,用关系代词which.where引导定语从句,在从句中作状语.
8.They改为It 考查代词.it代指上文提到的"a new playground".they只能指代复数名词.
9.加be 考查谓语动词.should是情态动词,后面要跟动词原形.available是形容词,前面要加上be作谓语.
10.加a 考查冠词.area是可数名词,其前加a表示泛指.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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