题目内容
【题目】假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:
1.未及时回信的原因;
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意:
1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
2.词数:120左右。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going on with you? I’m writing this letter to express my apology to you for not writing you back in time. In the first place, I’d be happy if you could accept my apology. It’s of great importance for me to make full preparations for the final exam last week, you know.
I have a busy schedule for the coming summer vocation. I’ve decided to find a part-time job so as to gain some social experience. I will also go to Shanghai to take a summer course. Besides, I’m going to work as a volunteer for an organization that helps poor children in the countryside.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. And I’d appreciate it very much if you would give me an early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:1.未及时回信的原因;2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯2.词数:120左右。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件,格式正确,内容符合要求,文章布局合理,同时使用高级句子。In the first place, I’d be happy if you could accept my apology.句中使用条件状语从句;It’s of great importance for me to make full preparations for the final exam last week, you know.动词不定式的复合结构做真正的主语,并在句中使用插入语you hnow;I’ve decided to find a part-time job so as to gain some social experience.动词不定式做目的状语;I’m going to work as a volunteer for an organization that helps poor children in the countryside.定语从句用在句中;另外,Besides, And I’d appreciate it very much if---的运用为文章增色添彩。