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11．据最新一项调查发现，"低头族"正以星火燎原之势蔓延．假定你是李华，请根据以下要点提示，用英语给《二十一世纪报》编辑部写一封读者来信，以引起社会各界对此的广泛关注．
1．描述这一现象；2．分析其原因及弊端；=3．你认为该如何改变现状．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．但可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数．
参考词汇：低头族phubbing
Dear editor，
I'm writing to you about a common phenomenon to draw it to the public attention．
As is often the case，when people are having meals，waiting for buses or even walking along streets，they are always addicted to their phones，heads hanging down，completely ignoring others．
The reason for the increasing number of phubbings everywhere is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything，such as playing mobile games，shopping online and keeping in touch with friends through QQ．However，too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety．Moreover，people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them．
Personally，people should wisely use their phones to help with their work and study．Meanwhile they'd better care more about their family and friends rather than phones．
Best wishes to you!．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
As is often the case，when people are having meals，waiting for buses or even walking along streets，they are always addicted to their phones，heads hanging down，completely ignoring others
通常情况下，当人们在吃饭、等候公共汽车或甚至走在路上，他们总是沉迷于自己的手机，头垂下来，完全无视别人．
高分句型二：
However，too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety．Moreover，people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them．
然而，过多接触手机对健康和安全的危害．此外，沉溺手机将失败与周围的人沟通．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm writing to you about a common phenomenon to draw it to the public attention．
As is often the case，when people are having meals，waiting for buses or even walking along streets，they are always addicted to their phones，heads hanging down，completely ignoring others（高分句型一）．
The reason for the increasing number of phubbings everywhere is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything，such as playing mobile games，shopping online and keeping in touch with friends through QQ．However，too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety．Moreover，people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them（高分句型二）．
Personally，people should wisely use their phones to help with their work and study．Meanwhile they'd better care more about their family and friends rather than phones．
Best wishes to you!
Yours truly，
Li Hu

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．