题目内容
16.假如你是Jack,你的初中老同学Rose上周给你写了一封邮件,询问你在新学校的生活和学习情况.请根据以下要点写一封回信.1.高中学习比以前更需要良好的学习习惯,合理利用时间和更加努力;
2.学校有许多俱乐部,你加入了其中一个,简述其对你的意义;
3.学校新栽了许多树,使得校园环境更加优美,更利于学习.(which)
4.虽然目前有一些烦恼,但有老师和同学的帮助,对未来确实充满希望.
注意:1.字数100~120
2.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数.
参考词汇:烦恼:worry(可数名词) 提示:which引导非限制性定语从句
Dear Rose,
Thank you for your e-mail.Now I'm excited to talk something about my senior high school life.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Jack.
分析 考查提纲类作文,本文要求考生以Jack的名义给Rose回邮件.叙述在新学校的生活和学习情况.要点如下:1.已经收到对方的邮件,感谢对方关心.2.高中学习比以前更需要良好的学习习惯,合理利用时间和更加努力;3.学校有许多俱乐部,你加入了其中一个,简述其对你的意义;4.学校新栽了许多树,使得校园环境更加优美,更利于学习.(which).5.虽然目前有一些烦恼,但有老师和同学的帮助,对未来确实充满希望.提纲类作文的要点均已经给出,考生需要的是正确且漂亮的转换成英文.尤其需要使用高级词汇以及高级句式,另外还需要合适的连接词连接所有要点.
【名师点睛】这篇范文属于提纲类作文中较好的一篇.首先文章布局合理,第一段属于过渡段,感谢对方发生邮件.第二段叙述高中生活的4个方面.第三段属于书信类短文的必备格式.在写作的过程中,作者使用了合适的连接词first of all,secondly,besides以及finally把四个要点串联成文.同时也使用了较多的高级句式,如形式宾语句I find it much more necessary to develop a good learning habit,make full use of time and work harder than ever before.非限制性定语从句Besides,more new trees have been planted recently,which makes our school more beautiful and a better place to study.强调句I do feel hopeful about my future because of the help of my kind teachers and classmates.这些高级句式的运用让文章文采斐然.
解答 Dear Rose,
Thank you for your e-mail.Now I'm excited to talk something about my senior high school life.
First of all,I find it much more necessary to develop a good learning habit,make full use of time and work harder than ever before.(高分句型一)Secondly,I have joined the English Club since a lot of clubs have been set up in my school not only because I want to learn English well with all my heart but I also feel it a great opportunity to make more friends.(高分句型二)Besides,more new trees have been planted recently,which makes our school more beautiful and a better place to study.(高分句型三)Finally,although at present I have some worries,I do feel hopeful about my future because of the help of my kind teachers and classmates.(115words)
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Jack
点评 阅读理解题测试考生在阅读基础上的逻辑推理能力,要求考生根据文章所述事件的逻辑关系,对未说明的趋势或结局作出合理的推断;或根据作者所阐述的观点理论,对文章未涉及的现象、事例给以解释.考生首先要仔细阅读短文,完整了解信息,准确把握作者观点.

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