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【题目】假如你是李华,上周你的外教Peter给你来信说他开始对中国古诗词感兴趣,希望你能教他几首中国古诗词,现在请你用英语给他回信,内容包括:
1.乐于帮助;2.确定碰面相关事宜(如时间、地点等等)。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
How is everything going on with you recently? I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking me for help. As a matter of fact, it is a great honor for me to introduce some Chinese ancient poems to you—my best friend. The following are my arrangements for it.
Firstly, let’s fix a time when both of us are available. What about this Saturday afternoon? In addition, there is no doubt that Renmin Park is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry, which is not far away from my home for yours. If it is not convenient for you, please tell me to make necessary adjustments.
Looking forward to your instant reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假如你是李华,上周你的外教Peter给你来信说他开始对中国古诗词感兴趣,希望你能教他几首中国古诗词,现在请你用英语给他回信。注意写信的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:1.乐于帮助;2.确定碰面相关事宜(如时间、地点等等)。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助,As a matter of fact事实上。还使用了定语从句In addition, there is no doubt that Renmin Park is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry, which is not far away from my home for yours.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。