题目内容
【题目】假设一批外国友人要在中国过春节,他们想了解我国过春节的情况。请你根据下面要点写一篇英语短文。
1、春节是中国的重大节日。
2、节前人们要大扫除。
3、全家人在一起吃年夜饭。
4、孩子们会到压岁钱。
5、年初一穿新衣服,走亲访友,互道吉利。
词数:100左右
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【答案】As you know, the Spring Festival in China is a grand festival. We celebrate it cheerfully. The day before the festival is eve. People have a thorough cleaning everywhere. In the evening the whole family are sitting together, having supper and watching TV until midnight. The money, which is called lucky money, is given to children by elders as a gift.
On the first day of the new year, all the people, old and young, put on new clothes, pay a visit to their friends and relatives and wish each other good luck in the new year.
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。同学们在写这篇文章时,
要注意以下几点:1. 假设一批外国友人要在中国过春节,他们想了解我国过春节的情况。
所以通篇的主要时态为一般现在时来描叙春节。
2. 文章的要点也基本上都给出来了:1、春节是中国的重大节日。2、节前人们要大扫除。3、全家人在一起吃年夜饭。4、孩子们会到压岁钱。5、年初一穿新衣服,走亲访友,互道吉利。考生要把要点全交代,不能有遗漏。
3.要拓展内容,在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【范文亮点】
As you know, the Spring Festival in China is a grand festival.
as引导的非限制性定语从句,是写作的一个重要的句型。
2.In the evening the whole family are sitting together, having supper and watching TV until midnight. 动词的并列使用,简单明了的介绍出文章的要点。
3.The money, which is called lucky money, is given to children by elders as a gift. 使用了Which引导的非限制性定语从句
4.all the people, old and young, put on new clothes, pay a visit to their friends and relatives and wish each other good luck in the new year.并列句的使用