Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改l0处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Union is strength no matter when you’re facing difficulties or in a dilemma. Cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.

There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate, refusing to work together with them. Therefore, it was no doubt that I was left alone, suffering from loneliness and failure. Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation. From then on, I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own. Surely cooperation made a great difference. Now I am getting well with my friends.

My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation, can we go beyond ourselves. As the saying go “United, we stand; divided, we fall.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】too---so

【2】classmate--- classmates

【3】it---there

【4】Unfortunately--- Fortunately-

【5】去掉the

【6】finish--- finishing

【7】getting后加on/along

【8】teach---taught

【9】with---to

【10】go---goes

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】too---so 此处考查so---that---引导的结果状语从句，故把too---so。

【2】classmate--- classmates 此处考查名词复数。根据句意“我的同学”，应该用复数形式，故把classmate--- classmates。

【3】it---there 考查固定句式：There is no doubt that---毫无疑问，故把it---there。

【4】Unfortunately--- Fortunately- 句意：很幸运，一位老师的合作价值观给我留下了深刻印象。故把Unfortunately--- Fortunately。

【5】去掉the 固定搭配：turn to sb. for help向某人求助，故去掉the。

【6】finish--- finishing 固定搭配：have difficulty in doing在做某事上有困难，故把finish--- finishing。

【7】getting后加on/along 固定词组：get on /along with与---相处。故在getting后加on/along。

【8】teach---taught 根据句意可知用现在完成时态，故把teach---taught。

【9】with---to 考查固定搭配：attach ---to---把---依附于---，故把with---to。

【10】go---goes 句意：正如言语所说，---。此处应该用一般现在时态，主语是单数第三人称，故把go---goes。

【学法指导】

1.在做短文改错时一定要注意固定搭配、固定词组、习惯用语和固定句式。比如第1小题too---so 此处考查so---that---引导的结果状语从句，故把too---so。第3小题it---there 考查固定句式：There is no doubt that---毫无疑问，故把it---there。第6小题finish--- finishing 固定搭配：have difficulty in doing在做某事上有困难，故把finish--- finishing。第7小题getting后加on/along 固定词组：get on /along with与---相处。故在getting后加on/along。第9小题with---to 考查固定搭配：attach ---to---把---依附于---，故把with---to。

2.在改错时一定要注意大小写。句子开头的单词第一个字母要大写，学生很容易忽视。比如第4小题Unfortunately--- Fortunately句意：很幸运，一位老师的合作价值观给我留下了深刻印象。故把Unfortunately--- Fortunately。