题目内容
14.暑假即将结束,你(张童)给你的美国笔友Peter写了一封信,内容需包括如下两个方面,也可以适当自我拓展.1、暑假的一些基本活动和体会
2、高二文理分科后你的一些打算(理科生 students of science文科生 students of liberal arts)
注意:1.词数100左右.
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Peter,
How I want to see you again!It has been two years since we last met in Shanghai.
Although this summer vacation has witnessed the hottest weather in my hometown,it is still a nice time for me.I don't need to study in the unair-conditioned classroom sweating.I usually go to the city library in the morning and do some jogging at dusk with my friends.Thanks to my sound sleep and regular exercise,I am stronger now.And I feel it is very interesting to be a traffic volunteer at the weekend,in which I have learnt a lot.
Next term I will be a Senior Two student of science/liberal arts.I know for sure there is so much homework for me to do,so many challenges for me to overcome and also so much beautiful scenery for me to enjoy.You know,I have longed to go to Hongkong University.I really want to be kissed by the Goddess of Fortune through my hard work.Please pray for me.
So much for today.
All the best!
Yours truly,
Zhang Tong.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
And I feel it is very interesting to be a traffic volunteer at the weekend,in which I have learnt a lot
我觉得这是周末的交通志愿者很有趣,这使我学到了很多.
高分句型二:
I know for sure there is so much homework for me to do,so many challenges for me to overcome and also so much beautiful scenery for me to enjoy.
我知道有这么多的作业要做,所以我克服许多挑战和那么多美丽的让我喜欢的景色.
解答 One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How I want to see you again!It has been two years since we last met in Shanghai.
Although this summer vacation has witnessed the hottest weather in my hometown,it is still a nice time for me.I don't need to study in the unair-conditioned classroom sweating.I usually go to the city library in the morning and do some jogging at dusk with my friends.Thanks to my sound sleep and regular exercise,I am stronger now.And I feel it is very interesting to be a traffic volunteer at the weekend,in which I have learnt a lot(高分句型一).
Next term I will be a Senior Two student of science/liberal arts.I know for sure there is so much homework for me to do,so many challenges for me to overcome and also so much beautiful scenery for me to enjoy(高分句型二).You know,I have longed to go to Hongkong University.I really want to be kissed by the Goddess of Fortune through my hard work.Please pray for me.
So much for today.
All the best!
Yours truly,
Zhang Tong
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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As (53)C turned out,my little publication went on to become Student,a national(54)B for young people in the U.K.My wife and I have two children,and I'd like to think we are bringing them up in the same way Dad (55)D me.
36.A.biologist | B.manager | C.lawyer | D.gardener |
37.A.strict | B.honest | C.special | D.learned |
38.A.praise | B.courage | C.power | D.warmth |
39.A.think | B.imagine | C.remember | D.guess |
40.A.unnecessary | B.unkind | C.unimportant | D.unusual |
41.A.Another | B.Some | C.Any | D.Other |
42.A.on | B.in | C.at | D.about |
43.A.in case | B.by turns | C.by chance | D.in return |
44.A.process | B.set | C.review | D.follow |
45.A.understanding | B.experienced | C.serious | D.demanding |
46.A.taking up | B.making up | C.picking up | D.keeping up |
47.A.suggestion | B.decision | C.notice | D.choice |
48.A.and | B.as | C.even if | D.as if |
49.A.helped | B.allowed | C.persuaded | D.suggested |
50.A.always | B.never | C.seldom | D.almost |
51.A.rather | B.but | C.for | D.therefore |
52.A.promise | B.task | C.belief | D.dream |
53.A.this | B.he | C.it | D.that |
54.A.newspaper | B.magazine | C.program | D.project |
55.A.controlled | B.comforted | C.reminded | D.raised |
After many long discussions at night in their (41)A bed,the two boys finally worked out an agreement.They would toss(掷)a coin.The (42)C would go down into the nearby mines and,with his earnings,(43)C his winning brother for the academy.Then,in four years,he would support the other one.Then Albrecht Durer won the toss and (44)D to Nuremberg.Albert went down into the dangerous mines and,for the next four years,(45)B his brother,whose work at the academy was almost an immediate sensation(轰动)-By the time he graduated,he was beginning to (46)A considerable fees for himself.
When the young artist (47)B home and said to his brother,"And now,Albert,blessed brother of mine,now it is your (48)D.Now you can go to the Academy to pursue your dream,and I will (49)A you."Albert rose and wiped tile (50)B from his cheeks."No,brother.I cannot go to Nuremberg.It is too (51)D for me.Look…look what four years in the mines have done to my (52)C!I cannot even hold a glass,much less make delicate lines on canvas (画布)(53)A a pen or a brush."
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36.A.fully | B.merely | C.completely | D.entirely |
37.A.heart | B.profession | C.method | D.words |
38.A.hopeless | B.promising | C.demanding | D.careless |
39.A.so | B.but | C.however | D.and |
40.A.study | B.give | C.send | D.offer |
41.A.crowded | B.separated | C.new | D.unusual |
42.A.winner | B.old | C.loser | D.younger |
43.A.expect | B.advertise | C.support | D.require |
44.A.flew away | B.left behind | C.set aside | D.went off |
45.A.deserted | B.financed | C.desired | D.envied |
46.A.earn | B.save | C.draw | D.spend |
47.A.arrived | B.returned | C.regained | D.got |
48.A.fate | B.time | C.top | D.turn |
49.A.take care of | B.make up of | C.make use of | D.take charge of |
50.A.smiles | B.tears | C.sweats | D.laughs |
51.A.tense | B.nervous | C.tiring | D.late |
52.A.eyes | B.pictures | C.hands | D.mines |
53.A.with | B.of | C.upon | D.in |
54.A.changed | B.kept | C.remembered | D.passed |
55.A.strange | B.surprising | C.touching | D.terrible |