Question

【题目】人人渴望幸福，但由于忙于学业或工作，我们忽视了幸福。你认为幸福是什么？结合生活中的事例阐述你对幸福的理解。

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【答案】

It can’t be denied that nowadays, our pace of life is so fast that we often neglect the real happiness. We are buried in books and work which seems to be endless. From my point of view, happiness lies in every little thing that happens in our daily life.

I can still remember the cold night when my mother and I were on the way to the shop to buy my clothes. Suddenly, an old lady selling flowers beside the street caught our eye, and my mother stopped. Then, she asked whether I was willing to turn my new clothes into a kind of help. I was only 5 years old then, but I nodded, although I didn’t know the real meaning of his words. Only after she bought all the flowers from the old lady did I realize that we helped her. I didn’t regret losing my clothes but felt very happy because I thought I had given the old lady warmth on such a cold winter.

Happiness is not the material satisfaction but the exact feeling of warmth, love and care from other people. Happiness is available to everyone. It only calls for a kind smile and a friendly hand. Everyone is a part of society. It’s our duty and pleasure to help those who are in trouble, and in turn will get happiness.

【解析】试题分析：1. 仔细审题。根据写作任务，要求学生认真审读提纲，领会意图，捕捉信息，确定文章时态及体裁。2. 撰写提纲。构思文章要点，写出每个段落主题句、关键词，然后确定细节和内容要点。3. 简写初稿。经过审题和列提纲后，开始写作，有意识地使用固定句型、关联词，把段落按逻辑顺序连成一体，形成基本连贯的初稿。复查是书面表达不可缺少的环节。要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。