Question

【题目】近年来，一些西方节日（如圣诞节情人节等）在中国越来越流行。许多人对这些节日狂热追捧，而对于一些中国传统节日（如春节、中秋节等）则无兴趣。请你就这一社会现象谈谈你的看法。

要求：1. 表达连贯，逻辑正确 2. 字数100-120 参考词汇：情人节：Valentine’s Day

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Western holidays such as Christmas, Valentine’s Day, are getting more and more popular in China. Some Chinese people even get crazy on them. But at the same time, people seem to have less enthusiasm for our traditional festivals such as the Spring Festival and the Mooncake Festival.

In my opinion, the celebration of western holiday is a good way of learning the western cultures, which helps to promote understanding and communication between Chinese cultures and other cultures. Besides, the celebration can also make our life more interesting. However, we should make great efforts to preserve and enrich our own traditional culture.

【解析】这是一篇针对社会现象表达自己观点的写作。主要表达你的立场，是该无视传统文化追捧西方文化，还是应该对自己的文化加以传承，对外来文化取其精华弃其糟粕。关键是逻辑性，观点态度明确。写作时要注意适当增加内容，以保证文章的连贯性。第一段第一句are getting more and more popular，用现在进行时表明西方文化在现在变得流行的势头。第三句But at the same time,插入语增加文章的亮点，与前一句很好地衔接增加句子连贯性。第一段最后一句such as举例论证，使观点更加鲜明。第二段开头用插入语In my opinion很好的表达自己的观点和立场，第二段第二句which helps to promote understanding and communication between Chinese cultures and other cultures.是which引导的非限定性定语从句，句型有特点。用插入语Besides很好的使所表达观点更丰富。最后一句However转折连词表达了表明了作者最后立场和观点。短语make great efforts不遗余力，用的很好，表现了我们要保护传统文化的决心。