Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你和同学们组建的舞蹈倶乐部将举行义演（benefit performance)。你的朋友美国留学生Peter是街舞高手。请你发一封电子邮件，请他来指导你们的街排练（rehearsal)。

内容要点如下：

1. 请求指导的缘由；

2. 指导时间与地点；

3. 欢迎他参加义演。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

How are things going with you?______________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How are things going with you? I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor by giving us some guidance on our new street dance.

Next month, the dance club, set up by my classmates and me, will give a benefit performance of a brand new street dance, hoping to raise money for the Hope Project to build a primary school. As we all know, you are expert at street dance, so you will surely make our performance a visual feast. Could you please assist us in our rehearsal as a dance coach on April 28 in our school stadium? Meanwhile, I sincerely invite you to join in our performance.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容是发一封电子邮件，请美国留学生来指导你们的街排练。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4、注意邮件格式。

【亮点说明】本文层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如复合句Next month, the dance club, set up by my classmates and me, will give a benefit performance of a brand new street dance, hoping to raise money for the Hope Project to build a primary school.等