Question

A blind boy sat on the steps of a building with a box by his feet. He held up a sigh which read, “I am blind, please help.” there were only a few coins in the box. They boy felt sad.

A man walked by. He took out a few coins from his pocket and dropped them into the box. Then he took the sigh, turned it around and wrote some words. He put the sigh back so that everyone who recognized his footsteps and asked, “Were you the one who changed my sign this morning? What did you write？“

Then man said, “I only wrote the truth. I said what you said but in a different way.”

What he had written was, “Today is a beautiful day but I can not see it.”

【写作内容】

以约30个词概括短文的要点；

然后以约120个词就”一个好主意“这个主题谈谈你的看法，内容包括：

1）结合以上故事，简单谈谈你对“好主意”的理解

2）请介绍你或你身边的人一个解决问题的好主意

3）怎样才能使自己常常有好主意：

【写作要求】

作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

A blind boy got little help when begging for money from others with some words written on a sign. But he finally attracted many other pedestrians’ attention after a passer-by offered to rewrite those words, receiving much help.

The story shows the power of “a good idea”. Instead of dealing with problems directly, people with a smart idea often see things in an unusual and unique angle, showing an ability to catch inspiration in life.

Years ago when my mother bought some expensive foods, she always refused to have some and let me eat them all. One day I got an idea. I often pretended that I couldn’t judge whether the foods are fresh and always asked her to try first, changing her habit without wordy persuasion.

As creativity does not come from nowhere, people need to not only collect wisdom and beauty in life actively，but also have a free mind. When we do not care much about rules, we are not far away from an excellent idea.

【解析】

试题分析：根据提示1：用约30个词慨括上文的主要内容，需要考生能够读懂所给原文，文中的复杂句子能够理解，要用最简单的语言慨括文章大意，不能抓住细节铺开来细写，那样就超过字数了，只需写一个男人更改了失明男孩的提示语，这个男孩就收到了来自别人的更多施舍。提示2：用约120个词就“一个好主意”这个主题谈谈你的看法，考生需要对失明男孩的故事给出自己的理解，要注意主语及动词时态。写作中注意使用连接词，做到语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】：第一段第二句But he finally attracted many other pedestrians’ attention after a passer-by offered to rewrite those words, receiving much help.使用不定式和现在分词做目的状语，是文章更加生动，表达更加简练和贴切。 第二段第二句Instead of dealing with problems directly, people with a smart idea often see things in an unusual and unique angle, showing an ability to catch inspiration in life.不紧使用了现在分词做目的状语，而且还使用with + n做伴随状语,表示某人处于某状态，使表达方式多样，显示出了考生扎实的语法功底。第三段第三句I often pretended that I couldn’t judge whether the foods are fresh and always asked her to try first, changing her habit without wordy persuasion.使用了that引导的宾语从句，并使用现在分词和介词短语作状语，只用了一句话就详细地表达出了作者的想法，不失为一大亮点。attract one’s attention, instead of ,deal with, come from, not only …but also…, far away from等组词的使用，也使得文章更加生动。连词when，after，as, whether, not only…but also等的使用使文章结构紧凑，逻辑清晰。

考点：考查议论文写作。