Question

5．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约．请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1．表示歉意；
2．解释原因；
3．另约时间．
注意：1．词数120～150；
2．可适当增加细节．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点内容写一封电子邮件．属于提纲作文．时态为一般现在时和一般现在时．人称以第一和三人称为主．重要短语：further study （进一步学习/深造），informed sb that（通知某人…），pick sb up （用车接某人），accept my appreciate（接受谢意），make another date （另外约定），show sb around （带领某人参观），inconvenience（不方便）．

解答 Dear Tom    
 I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Beijing with you next weekend，which I have promised．【高分句型】I feel sorry for it and want you to know what happened．（表示歉意）
  Just now，my cousin，Li Qing，who left home to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family．【高分句型】You know，we haven't seen each other for nearly a year．（解释原因）
  I sincerely hope you can accept my appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing．Once again，I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused．（另约时间）

                                                                                        All the best
                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，并充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．