Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Music plays a important role in my life and listen to music is my favorite activity. Usually I preferred to express my feeling through music, and I like pop music best. I don’t like rock music because of I think it’s too noisily. When I am tired after studying or when I am nervous before exams, music helps me feel relaxing and fresh. I am not good at singing or I can play the piano and the violin. In addition, I am fond of listening to foreign song in order to learn more about the cultures of different countries as well learning about the world better. Music makes your life more colorful.

Answer 1

【答案】1.a 改为an,

2.listen 改为listening;

3.preferred 改为prefer;

4.去掉of,

5. noisily 改为noisy;

6.relaxing改为relaxed;

7.or 改为but;

8.song改为songs,

9.在well后面加as

10.your 改为my

【解析】本文是一篇记叙短文。讲述了音乐对作者的重要性，并介绍了作者喜欢的歌曲类型。作者认为音乐丰富了他的生活。

1.“Music plays a important role in my life and listen to music is my favorite activity.” plays为动词，role为名词，前面有形容词important修饰，因此应使用冠词。而important的 第一个音节为元音，故将a改为an。

2.“and listen to music is my favorite activity.” 动名词作主语，在动词的基础上加Ing,使该动词或动词短语，有名词的各种特征，可作名词灵活使用。故将listen改为listening。

3.“Usually I preferred to express my feeling through music” 浏览全文为一般现在时态，前后时态应保持一致。故将preferred改为prefer。

4.“I don’t like rock music because of I think it’s too noisily.” because是连词,其后接原因状语从句或回答以why开头的问句； 而because of是复合介词,其后接名词、代词或动名词，或者what引导的名词性从句。“I think it’s too noisily.”是原因状语从句，故将of删掉。

5.“I don’t like rock music because of I think it’s too noisily.” too为副词，应修饰动词或形容词。故将noisily改为noisy。

6.“music helps me feel relaxing and fresh.” relaxed表示人内心受到放松，relaxing表示事情本身令人fangsong。故将relaxing改为relaxed。

7.“I am not good at singing or I can play the piano and the violin.” 根据前文“I am not good at singing”我不是个好歌手，以及后文“I can play the piano and the violin”我会弹钢琴和拉小提琴，两句之间为转折关系。故将or改为but。

8.“In addition, I am fond of listening to foreign song in order to learn more about the cultures of different countries as well learning about the world better.”由后文可知作者喜欢的是不同国家的歌曲，不只是一首，song为可数名词，故将song改为songs。

9.“I am fond of listening to foreign song in order to learn more about the cultures of different countries as well learning about the world better.” “learn more about the cultures of different countries”与“learning about the world better”两者之间表示一种并列关系，都在讲述听外国歌曲的好处，应该用并列形式。故在well后面加as。

10.“Music makes your life more colorful.”浏览全文可知本文说的是音乐对作者的重要性，因此是使作者的生活更加丰富多彩，故将your改为my。