题目内容
【题目】写作
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter从网上知道了巫山举办国际红叶节的消息,向你了解情况。请你给他写封邮件,介绍一下具体内容。
要点如下:
1. 时间:每年11月21日至12月31日,今年是第九届。
2. 活动内容:⑴开幕式 (Opening Ceremony)
⑵艺术电影周(免费观看电影)
⑶游山水,赏红叶
⑷品本地美食
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to share with you some information about the International Red Leaf Festival of Wushan.
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Best Wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’d like to share with you some information about the International Red Leaf Festival of Wushan.
The festival, starting in 2007, has celebrated its eight birthdays and the 9th Opening Ceremony falls on November 21. It will last about forty days until the end of December. During the festival, both visitors and local people have chances to enjoy art films for free in the Art Film Week. What attracts tourists most is the fantastic natural scenery in Wushan----the majestic mountains, clear water, white clouds and especially the red leaves covering the hillsides, which provide you with a visual feast. Apart from sightseeing, you cannot miss opportunities to taste the delicious local food, which, I’m sure, will leave you an unforgettable good memory.
Now more and more domestic and foreign visitors are coming to Wushan for a dreamlike journey.
Looking forward to your visit here.
Best Wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,给朋友写一封电子邮件说明巫山举办国际红叶节的情况。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的2个方面(1.时间:每年11月21日至12月31日,今年是第九届。2.活动内容:开幕式、艺术电影周(免费观看电影)、游山水,赏红叶 和品本地美食)的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般将来时说明情况。以第三人称为主。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如starting in 2007是动词ing做插入语, 主语从句What attracts tourists most is the fantastic natural scenery in Wushan 和非限制性定语从句which provide you with a visual feast。还有短语share with, Apart from等。