题目内容
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
More and more parents send their kids to various training classes and people had different
opinions towards this. Some people think that attend training classes can help kids learn some
skills. Also their minds can be broaden. Besides, kids can make a plenty of friends there. Other
people think that different kinds of training classes can be really tiring. Kids should be given more chance to relax and do whatever they are interested ∧. In addition, unacceptable training classes
will certain be against the nature of kids, that may easily make them bored. Basing on the above
arguments, I think that parents should consider their children s interest first after making the decision to send them to training classes.
had 改成have
attend改成 attending
broaden改成broadened
去掉a
chance改成 chances
interested ∧in
certain 改成certainly
that 改成which 或在 that前加 and
Basing 改成Based
after 改成before
【解析】
本文用的是一般现在时,讲述目前的一种现象。)
动名词短语做主语
需用过去分词
短语错误,只有plenty of
chance为可数名词,更多的机会应用复数
be interested in
副词作状语,修饰谓语动词
which引导非限制性定语从句;加上and可用that指示代词
Based on过去分词作状语,basing后需有宾语
在做决定之前考虑孩子们的兴趣。
