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3.Directions:Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文.
match      winner    loser              result
内容:(1)自己或他人的一次经历;
     (2)你的感受.
注意:(1)必须使用所给4个关键词;
     (2)词数不少于120个;
     (3)不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.

分析 本文为开放式作文,根据所给关键词和提示内容,要求考生运用生活中的事例来解释说明,属于提纲作文.在写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般过去时为主.重要短语:be lost in thought(陷入沉思),put all our efforts to do…..(努力去做),desired to do (渴望去做),belonged to (属于),claim (声称,宣称),focus on(集中在…..),sb be convinced that(与…..相处融洽).

解答 In my life,there is an experience making me lost in thought.Last month,I,together with my teammates,had a basketball match against another basketball team,hoping to win the match and earning great honor for our team.【高分句型】Having put all our efforts to practice playing basketball whenever we had time,we were strongly desired to be the winner.【高分句型】However,not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser at all.【高分句型】All of us felt disappointed,believing that honor never belonged to us.It was our coach's words that educated us a lot.He claimed that instead of being focused on the result,we should focus more on the process and correct our mistakes,which would help improve us more in the future.(经历)
From this experience,I am convinced that a result is not everything.Only by focusing more on correcting our mistakes can we better ourselves in the future.(感受)

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点和关键词.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.

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(1)表达给她提供帮助的意愿;
(2)说明你能胜任辅导的理由;
(3)给出讲好普通话的两点建议;
(4)提出你学习英语的具体需求.
注意:
(1)词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your MandarmI am quite interested in it. I think I'm fit for it.As a student,I have been learning Mandarin for many years.In addition,I am Chinese,which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I'm quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time,so if you want to learn it well,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday.As the saying goes,practice makes perfect. Besides,you can also read some books in Chinese,see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes.Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning,by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post,you say you can teach English as a reward.It is just what I want.I'm eager to improve my English.So,if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin,you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese,so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Hope for you early reply!
Yours Sincerely
Li Xia.

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