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11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
 
I love camping．It is my favouritest way to spend the summer vacation．Last year，myfamilies and I went camping in the countryside．It was one of the excited experiences I had never had．We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day．We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully．For a whole week，I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air．At night，I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees，and I feel so peaceful．It doesn't cost many to camp．What I believe it's the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty．

分析 作者在本文中主要讲述了去年自己与家人一起在乡下露营的经历以及感受．

解答 I love camping．It is my favouritestway to spend the summer vacation．Last year，
my families and I went camping in the countryside．It was one of the excited experiences
I had never had．We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day．We cooked over a fire
and the food always tasted wonderfully．For a whole week，I saw lovely mountain views
or breathed fresh air．At night，I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees，and I feelso
peaceful．It doesn't costmanyto camp．What I believe it's the best way to get close∧nature
and enjoy its beauty．
详解：
1．favouritest改为favourite    考查形容词的最高级   由于favourite本身就具有"最喜爱的"意思，因此它没有比较级与最高级的形式；故用favourite．
2．families改为family    考查集体名词    本句中的family是"家人"的意思，是一个本身就含有复数意义的集体名词，所以其后不能加S；故用family．
3．excited改为exciting   考查现在分词    此处在句中作定语，修饰表示物的名词experiences（经历）；故用exciting．
4． never改为ever   考查句意理解以及副词    本句的意思是：这是我曾经经历过的激动人心的经历之一；never：从不，从来没有；ever：曾经；此处指的是曾经经历过的，故用ever．
5．wonderfully改为wonderful   考查形容词    此处用在系动词tasted之后作表语，故用形容词wonderful．
6．or改为and   考查句意理解及连词    本句的意思是：整整一个星期，我看到了可爱的山景，并呼吸着新鲜空气；此处表示并列，而非选择关系；故用and．
7．feel改为felt   考查时态    根据上文提到的时间状语"Last year"以及本句中的"At night"可知，此处讲述的是作者在去年的一天晚上露营时的感受，所以应使用一般过去时；故用felt．
8．many改为much    考查代词     many指代可数名词，much指代不可数名词；此处用来指代不可数名词（钱，花费）；故用much．
9．去掉I之前的what   考查名词性从句    本句为宾语从句；主句为I believe，"it's the best way to get close∧nature and enjoy its beauty"为宾语从句；故应去掉主句之前的what．
10．close之后加to    考查固定短语    be/get close to意为：靠近，接近；此处指的是：接近大自然；故在close之后加to．

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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