Question

10．时下，越来越多的家庭拥有了轿车，同时车祸也在不断上升．请围绕"How to Drive safely？"写一篇80～100词的文章，内容要点如下（括号中的词汇可供参考）：
为了保护你和他人，开车时应记住以下几点：（in order to，protect ）
1．不酒后驾车；（drink wine）
2．不疲劳驾驶；（tiredly）
3．开车途中不使用电话：
4．遇到行人减慢你的车速．（slow down）
How to Drive Safely？
Nowadays，more and more families have cars．At the same time，there are a lot of car accidents every day．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So in order to protect you and others，you should obey the following when you're driving．为了保护你和别人的安全，开车的时候你应该遵守以下规则．
高分句型二：
Finally，you should slow down when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road．
最后，当你看到有人开车走在你前面的路上时，你应该放慢速度．
句型一 in order to protect you and others..该部分使用了固定短语in order to 位于句首，作目的状语
句型二 when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road 该句是一个由when引导的时间状语从句
除此以外，该文章还有以下短语和重要词汇：in front of 在．．前面

解答 Nowadays，more and more families have cars．At the same time，there are a lot of car accidents every day．So in order to protect you and others，you should obey the following when you're driving．（高分句型一）（点明写作目的）First，you mustn't drive your car after drinking wine．If you really need to drink some，you can take a taxi or a bus to the restaurant or home．Then you'd better not drive tiredly．When you feel tired，you can stop your car to have a rest．Next，don't use your phone when you're driving．Finally，you should slow down when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road．（高分句型二）
   If all the drivers can remember these，there will be fewer car accidents．（总结开车重要性）

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