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4．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mr．Li，
I'm very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning．I got up early as usually in the morning，but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle's front tyre（轮胎）flat．I wanted to take bus or taxi to school，and I didn't have any money with me．I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing．Unluckily，there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning．So I had to walk to school，carrying my bicycle all the way．That's how I was late for school．
Please don't worry with my lessons，Mr．Li．I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary．
Yours，
Wang Hui．

分析 作者在这篇短文中向老师解释了迟到两节课的原因．作者早晨像往常一样准备上学去的时候却发现自行车轮胎扁了，想坐车去上学
但身上却没有钱，就只好去修车，不幸的是大早晨没有一家修车铺开门，所以作者不得不步行去学校，这就是迟到的原因．作者还请老师
不要担心他的功课，需要的时候他就会向老师寻求帮助的．

解答 Dear Mr．Li，
I'm very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning．I got up early as usually in the morning，but when I was ready 
                                                              lessons                                               usual
to leave I find my bicycle's front tyre（轮胎）flat．I wanted to take∧bus or taxi to school，and I didn't have any money with me
              fond                                                                               a                                 but         
．I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing．Unluckily，there were not any bicycle repair shops were 
                                                                                        repaired                                                                            去掉were
open in the early morning．So I had to walk to school，carrying my bicycle all the way．That's how I was late for school．
                                                                                                                                            why
Please don't worry with my lessons，Mr．Li．I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary．
                            about                                                          them
Yours，
Wang Hui．
1．lesson改为lessons；考查名词复数，lessons是可数名词，前面有two，所以要用复数形式．
2．usually改为usual；考查固定搭配，as usual是固定短语，意为"像往常一样，照例"．
3．find改为fond；考查动词时态，结合上文，前面用了一般过去式，这里动词也要用过去时态．
4．bus前面加a；考查冠词，这里用a表示泛指，泛指"一辆公共汽车或出租车"．
5．and改为but；考查连词，结合语境，这里应该用but表示转折关系，即"我想做公共汽车或出租车去上学，但我身上没带钱"．
6．repairing改为repaired；考查固定搭配，get sth done意为"找人做某事"，这里句意为"我想找修自行车"，所以用 repaired．
7．去掉were；考查句式结构，这句意为"没有一家修车铺开门"，形容词open说明一种状态，前面不加系动词，所以去掉were．
8．how改为why；考查疑问副词，分析句意，应当理解为"这就是我迟到的原因"，故用why．
9．with改为about；考查介词，worry about是固定搭配，意为"为…担心"．
10．it改为them；考查代词，结合上下文，这里代词要指代的是前面的 lessons，所以代词用复数形式them．

点评 在短文改错当中，首先要从整体掌握短文大意，结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识，习惯用法，短语搭配等对短文进行分析，以便找出文中的错误所在并加以改正．

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