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【题目】假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Encouragement, what is a kind of power, is very important.

Failing my English exam once got me casting down. My teacher encouraged me not to lose hearts. He said it was no big deal to fail a exam and what mattered was to figure out the reasons instead of feeling sorry for me. I looked into my English paper and realized that the reason why I failed was because I had two weeks’ sick leave. So I made up for the lessons I have missed and my efforts was paid off in the following exams.

Encouragement is great benefit to me and I’ll give it to those who are in need of it.

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【解析】1.此处Encouragement是先行词，指物，在后面的非限制性定语从句中做主语，故把what---which。

2.句意：英语考试失败使我沮丧。get +宾语+过去分词，根据句意可知把casting---cast.

3.固定词组：lose heart丧失信心，故把hearts---heart.

4.名词exam是以元音开头，表示“一”，故把a---an。

5.句意：重要的是找出原因，而不是为我感到难过。根据句意可知把me---myself。

6.句意：我浏览了我的试卷。look through浏览，仔细查看，根据句意可知把into---through。

7. the reason做主语，后面的表语从句用that，故把because---that。

8.句意：我弥补了我错过的功课。根据句意可知定语从句用过去完成时态，故把have---had。

9.句意：我的付出在接下来的考试中得到了回报。根据句意可知此处是主动语态，故把was去掉。

10.句意：鼓励对我来说是有利的。be a great benefit to sb.故在is 和great之间家a。