Question

【题目】请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解，以“Come back to reality”为题，用英语写一篇作文。

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1. 简要描述漫画的内容； 2. 概述你对这幅图的理解； 3. 举例说明你会怎样做。

注意： 1. 可参照漫画适当发挥； 2. 作文词数150左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Come back to reality

As is shown in the picture, a woman is sitting in front of the computer and trying to add more friends to her facebook. Just outside the door, some people are eagerly watching her, hoping to make friends with her.

This picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts. They lost themselves in the virtual world and if it continues, they will eventually be cut off from reality. There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting, but that’s not the reason for us to go too far. Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet can lead to a disaster, mentally and physically. The real world that we live in is what counts.

As for myself, I’ll devote myself to worthwhile things in real life, from making friends to my studies. If necessary, I will seek information on the Internet, but I won’t be addicted to it. Only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于看图作文。题为：Come back to reality. 看图作文第一步要准确读图：一位女士正在脸谱上加好友，而门外站在很多人希望和她成为好朋友。以此来说明现在很多人都沉溺于虚拟空间，忽视现实社会。第二段概述对于这幅图的理解：现实生活中很多人网络成瘾，喜欢在虚拟世界里遨游，忽视与人沟通。这回带来很多个人精神和身体上的问题，也会带来很多社会问题。最后举例说明该如何做：多于身边人交流，合理使用网络，但是不依赖网络。

【亮点说明】范文中最大的亮点在于高级短语和句式的运用，如remind…of….；be cut off from reality；be devoted to….；非限制性定语从句As is shown in the picture，非谓语动词hoping to…，最后的倒装句Only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.这些高级句式的运用提升了文章的档次。