题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华, 你正在为高考紧张复习, 但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。 要点如下:
1. 自我介绍。
2. 求助内容:作业多, 没有时间运动;压力大, 难以入睡……
3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Kate,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my college Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you a favor.
There are two main problems which I’m faced with. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressed because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
As for these problems,I sincerely hope you can offer me some suggestions. I’d really appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
Yours Sincerely,
Li hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
第1步:根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件;假定你是李华, 你正在为高考紧张复习, 但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。 要点如下:1. 自我介绍;2. 求助内容:作业多, 没有时间运动;压力大, 难以入睡……;3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
第2步:根据写作要求, 确定关键词(组), 如:be busy doing sth.(忙于做某事);college Entrance Exam(高考);concentrate on(集中精力于);be faced with(面对);let sb. down(让某人失望)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。