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5．请你对其下面是一段短文进行修改．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误 涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词． 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
With the development of modern society，fast food restaurants are becoming more and more popular to many people in the world，but they are especial popular with children．
One reason is because many fast food restaurants now give a child a present with every Child's meal，which draw more and more children's attention．Most fast food restaurants made a series of toys for customers to collect them．The collectors are not only children．
There are lots of adult who also enjoy collecting the toys such as teddy bears，model cars or electronic toys．Some people had collected the toys for many years．Believe it or not，some of the older toy collections worth much money．

分析 文章大意：本文主要介绍了快餐受欢迎的原因．很多快餐店给孩子礼物，这吸引了越来越多小孩的注意力，大部分的快餐店做了一系列的玩具让顾客收藏，收藏不仅是小孩，还有很多成年人．

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1．to--with  考查介词搭配．be popular with 是固定短语，意思是"受某人的欢迎"．
2．especial--especially 考查副词． 本句中应该用副词修饰形容词．
3．becasue--that 考查表语从句．the reason 做主语，后面的表语从句如果不缺少主语、宾语或表语时，则用that引出原因．
4．draw--draws 考查主谓一致．本句中含有定语从句，which代指前面一件事，所以谓语动词应该用第三人称单数．
5．made--make 考查时态．本文主要叙述了目前的情况，所以用一般现在时．
6．去掉collect后面的   them 考查代词．to collect是不定式修饰前面的toys，collect 的逻辑宾语其实就是toys，所以去掉them．
7．adult--adults  考查名词 单复数． 前面有 lots of 修饰，adult是可数名词，所以用复数形式．
8．or--and 考查连词．前后几个词是并列关系．
9．had--have 考查时态．本文主要叙述了目前的情况，所以用一般现在时．
10．worth前面加  are 考查谓语动词．本句中应该是系表结构，形容词前面应该加be动词．

点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

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