Question

【题目】假定你是高二1班的李华，你的朋友美国学生Chris给你发邮件说他对中国的太极拳很感兴趣，想学习，请你给些建议。请根据以下要点给他写回信。

内容包括：1. 简单介绍太极拳。例如：是中国传统武术的一种；大约400年历史；全球有3亿太极拳练习者，等等。2. 给Chris几条有关学习太极拳的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

可能用到的词汇：Tai Chi太极拳；martial art武术：

Dear Chris,

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris,

I am very glad to know that you are willing to learn Tai Chi, which is a kind of traditional Chinese martial art with a history of about 400 years There are about 0.3 billion players throughout the world

By practicing Tai Chi, not only can you build up your body, but also you can release your stress. Before you start, first, get an experienced coach who can teach you standard movements. Second, do warm-up exercise before practicing, regulate your breath and focus on what you are doing Lastly, be sure to practice it every day and don’t give up halfway.

I am sure you will make great progress if you keep on doing it.

Yours

Li Hun

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封书信：你的朋友美国学生Chris给你发邮件说他对中国的太极拳很感兴趣，想学习，请你给些建议。请根据以下要点给他写回信。内容包括：1. 简单介绍太极拳。例如：是中国传统武术的一种；大约400年历史；全球有3亿太极拳练习者，等等。2. 给Chris几条有关学习太极拳的建议。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：learn Tai Chi（学太极）；a kind of traditional Chinese martial art（中国传统武术）；build up your body（增强你的身体）；make great progress（取得大的进步）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。I am very glad to know that you are willing to learn Tai Chi, which is a kind of traditional Chinese martial art with a history of about 400 years句中使用that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句；By practicing Tai Chi, not only can you build up your body, but also you can release your stress.句中使用部分倒装；who can teach you standard movements.句中who引导定语从句；另外，By practicing Tai Chi, Before you start, first, Second, Lastly,等的运用为文章增色添彩。