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13．假定你是李华，你所在的城市为了改善环境，最近推出了"摩拜单车"（mobike）-公共自行车租借活动．租用的人很多，但出现了乱停乱放，占用机动车道和故意破坏等现象．请你用英语给ChinaDaily的编辑写一封信，反映这一社会问题，并针对以上现象提出改进措施．注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数．
Dear editor，
I am glad to find more and more public bicycles are provided in the street for people to rent．
However，problems also arise．The bicycles are left almost everywhere at will in the street．Also，many people ride the bicycles on the driveway，causing a lot of traffic accidents．Worse still，damages have been found on some new bicycles．My suggestions on how to improve the situation are as follows．
First of all，Parking lot should be designed and decided on certain specific areas in the street，In this way，fewer people will leave the bicycle as they please．Secondly，more roads for bicycles need to be provided．
I hope this bicycle renting project will help build better traffic and improve the air quality in the city．
Yours
Li Hua．
分析 （高级句型一）many people ride the bicycles on the driveway，causing a lot of traffic accidents．
该句式使用causing现在分词做状语表示结果；句意为很多人在机动车道骑车，结果造成很多交通事故；
（高分句型二Parking lot should be designed and decided on certain specific areas in the street．
该句使用了被动句式，强调停车场要被建立；
高级词汇：at will 随意；decide on 决定；
过渡词使用：Also也；First of all首先；In this way用这种方式；Secondly第二；Worse still更糟糕的是；
解答 Dear editor，
I am glad to find more and more public bicycles are provided in the street for people to rent．（提出问题）However，problems also arise．The bicycles are left almost everywhere at will in the street．Also，（高级句型一）many people ride the bicycles on the driveway，causing a lot of traffic accidents．Worse still，
damages have been found on some new bicycles．My suggestions on how to improve the situation are as
follows．
First of all，（高分句型二）Parking lot should be designed and decided on certain specific areas in the
street，（我的建议）In this way，fewer people will leave the bicycle as they please．Secondly，more roads for bicycles need to be provided．
I hope this bicycle renting project will help build better traffic and improve the air quality in the city．
Yours
Li Hua．
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型
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