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7.假设你是李华,今天上午你和交换生Lucy因小事吵架.下午,你想请她看电影Beauty and Beast作为道歉.请给她写一张便条.
要点:1.表达你的歉意;
2.请她看电影;
3.晚上7:30,万达广场电影院.
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数.
Dear Lucy,
I am so sorry that I quarreled with you this morning.I regret having said something unpleasant to you.I didn't control myself well at that time.In order to make it up,I plan to invite you to see a film with me together.(高分句型一)
The film is called Beauty and Beast,which tells a romantic love story between a common girl and a prince,who becomes a beast in the film.(高分句型二)I have bought 2 tickets.And I will wait for you at Wanda Square at 7:00 pm,for the film will begin 30 minutes later.(高分句型三)
I do apologize for what I did again.Please be there on time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息 假设你是李华,今天上午你和交换生Lucy因小事吵架.下午,你想请她看电影Beauty and Beast作为道歉.请给她写一张便条,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:表达你的歉意;请她看电影;晚上7:30,万达广场电影院.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:quarrel with与…争吵;regret having done后悔已经做过某事;In order to 以便,为了;apologize for因为…而道歉;wait for 等待
In order to make it up,I plan to invite you to see a film with me together.(高分句型一)
The film is called Beauty and Beast,which tells a romantic love story between a common girl and a prince,who becomes a beast in the film.(高分句型二)
And I will wait for you at Wanda Square at 7:00 pm,for the film will begin 30 minutes later.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Lucy,
      I am so sorry that I quarreled with you this morning.I regret having said something unpleasant to you.I didn't control myself well at that time.In order to make it up,I plan to invite you to see a film with me together.(高分句型一)
     The film is called Beauty and Beast,which tells a romantic love story between a common girl and a prince,who becomes a beast in the film.(高分句型二)I have bought 2 tickets.And I will wait for you at Wanda Square at 7:00 pm,for the film will begin 30 minutes later.(高分句型三)
      I do apologize for what I did again.Please be there on time.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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