题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Jack给你发来邮件,告诉你他参加美国中西部“汉语桥”比赛(U. S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest) 获得了一等奖,希望你继续帮他学习中文。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。要点如下:
1.祝贺他获奖;
2.你会帮他学中文,同时希望继续向他学习英语;
3.祝愿他能来中国参加决赛。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m so pleased to learn that you got the first prize in the U. S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest. Congratulations! You are so great to make such rapid progress in learning Chinese! I hope we can continue to learn from and help each other while you help me with my English and I can help you with your Chinese.
I also hope you will be chosen to participate in the final contest to be held in October, which will allow me a chance to show you around my hometown. You are certain to improve and deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. And I’m sure you can enjoy your stay here and learn a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文要求根据美国笔友Jack发来邮件,告诉你他参加美国中西部“汉语桥”比赛(U. S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest)获得了一等奖,希望你继续帮他学习中文。请给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括:1.祝贺他获奖;2.你会帮他学中文,同时希望继续向他学习英语;3.祝愿他能来中国参加决赛。故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了宾语从句that you got the first prize in the U. S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest.定语从句which will allow me a chance to show you around my hometown.;rapid progress,show around等词汇的运用为文章增色添彩。