题目内容
【题目】书面表达
近来,中国游客在海外的不文明行为倍受争议。假设你是李华,一名国际旅行社的导游,就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。
1、列举不文明行为: 2、指出其影响: 3、提出建议。
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、首句已给出,不计入总词数。
As a tour guide of an international travel agency,I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.
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【答案】
One Possible Version:
As a tour guide of an international travel agency, I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights. Such bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.
Measures should be taken to stop this. First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,根据提示信息来完成写作。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. 是定语从句,Measures should be taken to stop this.使用了被动语态。此外,文章还使用了大量短语caused great damage to,win respect for 等。插 First,Besides, Last,的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。