Question

【题目】假如你是李华，已经被大学录取，即将进入大学学习。请你用英语给好友Sam写一封信，谈谈进入大学后的打算。短文应包含以下要点：

1、尽快适应环境;

2、注重能力发展。

注意：

1. 全文100词左右；

2. 书信的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sam,

How are you getting along with your life recently? _______________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sam,

How are you getting along with your life recently? Today I’m writing to talk about my plan for college life in the near future.

College life is both a joy and a challenge to me. Therefore, adjusting myself quickly to the new circumstance is the first thing I will deal with. For example, I’ll try to get used to the college schedule as soon as possible and I’ll make some friends so that I can feel at ease in college.

Next, various abilities should be developed. Besides being independent in study and life, I will enter for meaningful activities to get more social practice and develop my strong points.

Can you give me some advice? As a sophomore, you must have a lot to tell me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，已经被大学录取，即将进入大学学习。请你用英语给好友Sam写一封信，谈谈进入大学后的打算。短文应包含以下要点：1、尽快适应环境;2、注重能力发展。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 全文100词左右；2. 书信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，格式正确，内容齐全，布局合理，运用高级句子。adjusting myself quickly to the new circumstance is the first thing I will deal with.句中使用省略that的定语从句；I’ll try to get used to the college schedule as soon as possible and I’ll make some friends so that I can feel at ease in college.并列句和目的状语从句完美结合；various abilities should be developed.含情态动词的被动语态；Besides being independent in study and life,介词后面跟动名词形式；另外，Therefore, For example, as soon as possible，Next,的运用为文章增色添彩。