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12.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mary给你写了一封信求助.她因为最近学习压力大长胖了,时常被同学们嘲笑,并且长胖也影响了她自己的健康,因此她感到非常郁闷.请根据下列要求用英语给她回一封信.要点如下:
1.同情她的处境并安慰她,胖或瘦没有统一标准;
2.强调保持健康的重要性;
3.给出保持健康的建议.
注意:1.词数100字左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
2.可适当增加细节,以使文连贯流畅.
Dear Mary,
I'm so glad to hear from you.butDear Mary,
Iam so glad to hear from you.but Ifeel so desperately sorry to learn that you are depressed about some extra weight you have put on recently.To begin with,being fat or slim is merely a matter of personal opinion.With different people holding different views on this subject,there is no agreed standard for an ideal figure.So there is no need for you to worry about.What's more,it being fit that is the most important for us.Only when you have a healthy body can you live to the fullest.As far as Iam concerned,you can do some sports daily by which means you can keep healthy.Most importantly,it is suggested that you should go on a balanced diet at the same time,thus doing good to your health.Ihope what Isaid above can be of great help to you.after all,health is to us what water is to life.Iam looking forward to hearing your good news.
Best wishes!
Yours forever,
Li Hua
Yours forever,
Li Hua.

分析 这是一封劝慰朋友的书信.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一表明自己同情她的处境并安慰她;二强调保持健康的重要性; 三给出保持健康的建议.
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如:As far as I am concerned、after all以及With different people holding different views on this subject.还运用高级词汇desperately,merely等等.并注意了句子的衔接如:What's more,Most importantly以及thus等等.
【高分句型】
Only…can you…,只有…你才能…(Only when you have a healthy body can you live to the fullest,只有当你拥有一个健康的身体,你才能活得充实)
it is suggested that…,用于提出建议.(it is suggested that you should go on a balanced diet at the same time,建议你应该均衡饮食)
health is to us what water is to life,健康对我们来说就如同水对生命的意义.

解答 Dear Mary,
      I am so glad to hear from you.but I feel so desperately sorry to learn that you are depressed about some extra weight you have put on recently.To begin with,being fat or slim is merely a matter of personal opinion.With different people holding different views on this subject,there is no agreed standard for an ideal figure.So there is no need for you to worry about.What's more,it being fit that is the most important for us.Only when you have a healthy body can you live to the fullest.As far as I am concerned,you can do some sports daily by which means you can keep healthy.Most importantly,it is suggested that you should go on a balanced diet at the same time,thus doing good to your health.I hope what I said above can be of great help to you.after all,health is to us what water is to life.I am looking forward to hearing your good news.
Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours forever,
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文.
提纲类写作是近年高考英语书面表达的热点题型,命题人 通常以提纲作文的形式考查书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等.提纲作文的选材范围很广,内容简单易懂,且多是考生熟悉的话题.这类题型的主要特点 是要点明确,范围具体.但考生也容易受中文提纲的制约,将书面表达变成了翻译,造成语法结构和词汇上的单调,甚至写出结构不完整的句子.

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