Question

6．假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the Internet three days ago．The gift whose the price is not high is a beautiful pink cup decorating with my sister's name，her date of birth，and some best wishes to her as well．It's such lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I liked it by first sight．
Besides，I am very satisfying with Alipay Security Control，which is very convenienct and safely．And I am pleased with the delivery service．I received the cup yesterday．Don't you think it's very fast？
He enjoy shopping online very much．There is no doubt that more and more people preferred to shop online nowadays．We don't need spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good number of different choice on the Internet．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者给妹妹购买一件价格不是很高的粉色杯子，上面有妹妹的名字，出生日期及一些祝愿．作者对投递很满意，第一天购买，第二天就收了货物．作者认为不必花很多时间逛商店，在网上有很多选择．

解答 I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the Internet three days ago．The gift whose the price is not high is a beautiful pink cup decorating with my sister's name，her date of birth，and some best wishes to her as well．It's such lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I liked it by first sight．
Besides，I am very satisfying with Alipay Security Control，which is very convenient and safely．And I am pleased with the delivery service．I received the cup yesterday．Don't you think it's very fast？
He enjoy shopping online very much．There is no doubt that more and more people preferredto shop online nowadays．We don't need∧spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good number of different choice on the Internet．
详解：
1．去掉the 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词The gift在从句中作定语，the是多余的，要去掉．
2．decorating改为decorated 考查过去分词．cup与decorate之间是动宾关系，用过去分词短语作后置定语．
3．such改为so 考查固定搭配．such+a（an）+adj．+单数可数名词+that从句；so+形容词+a（n）+单数名词+that从句．此处应是后者．
4．by改为at 考查固定搭配．at first sight意为"乍看之下； 一看到…就"，是固定搭配．
5．satisfying改为satisfied 考查固定搭配．be satisfied with意为"对…感到满意"，是固定搭配．
6．safely改为safe 考查形容词．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，convenient和safe都是形容词作表语．
7．He改为I 考查代词．全文都是用第一人称讲述事情，用I．
8 preferred改为prefer 考查动词时态．本文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．
9．加to 考查动词不定式．此处need是实义动词，后接动词时有动词不定式．
10．choice改为choices 考查名词复数．choice是可数名词，其前有different修饰时，用复数形式．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．