题目内容
13.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计.
A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011.He is still active in protecting the environment.He suggests living a lowcarbon life,which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air.For example,she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something.While he is watching TV,he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light.Therefore,he goes to work by bike instead of driving.Some people think what he is doing is just a show.No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us.As far as I am concerned,I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior.Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
分析 本文主要讲述LowCarbon Brother用自己的日常行为来支持低碳环保生活的具体事例及作者对他的赞赏和支持.
解答 A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011.He is still active in protecting the environment.He suggests living a lowcarbon life,which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air.For example,she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something.While he is watching TV,he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light.Therefore,he goes to work by bike instead of driving.Some people think what he is doing is just a show.No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us.As far as I am concerned,I am strongly in support∧his idea and his behavior.Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
详解:
1.become改为became 考查动词时态.根据时间状语in 2011,要用一般过去时态.
2.reducing改为reduce 考查词语用法.此处help sb.do sth./help sb.to do sth.意为"帮助某人做某事",reduce用动词原形.
3.she改为he 考查代词.he指代前文中的A young man called LowCarbon Brother.
4.or改为and 考查连词.前后句是顺承关系而非选择关系,用连词and.
5.up改为down 考查词语用法.turn up意为"调高",turn down意为"调低",此处应是:调低.
6.Therefore改为Besides 考查副词.前后两个分句之间是递进关系而非转折关系,且副词besides.
7.simply改为simple 考查形容词.life是名词,要用形容词修饰.
8.invention改为inventions 考查名词复数.此处的"发明"不止一个,要用复数形式.
9.加of 考查固定搭配.in support of意为"支持",是固定搭配.
10.去掉but 考查连词.在英语中,两个分句要用连词连接,在已经有although连接句子的情况下,but是多余的,要去掉.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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