Question

20．随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂．课件休息时，有学校利用它播放音乐．你班就"课间是否要播放音乐"展开讨论．请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及个人看法．

大多数同学认为	部分同学认为
1．能给大家带来快乐，能活跃气氛； 2．能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳，使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备．	1．课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期的效果； 2．课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音．

注意：
1．对所给要点进行陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译．
2．词数100左右．开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not．
                                             

Answer 1

分析 本文的写作遵循议论文的"三段式"进行，首先对一些学生的观点进行陈述，能活跃气氛music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere．；能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳，使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备 This can help us make full preparationsfor the next class；能给大家带来快乐Listening to music also makes us feel happy．然后，对另一些人的观点进行陈述，课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期的效果they can'tget the expected effect from playing music，课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音instead of noise produced by music．最后，对自己的观点进行表达，可以表示自己支持播放轻音乐，因为轻音乐既能够使学生欣赏又能够得到休息，同时也可以表达应该建议学校播放适合学生的励志歌曲等．
Most of the students think that music should beplayed．As we know，music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere．（高分句型一）
Besides，after hard study，music can bring us relaxation，which reduces the tiredness．（高分句型二）
In their opinion，they can't get the expected effect from playing music，for the class break time is too short．What is needed most during the classbreak is peace instead of noise produced by music．（高分句型三）
Besides，I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students．（高分句型四）

解答 Our class held a discussion about whether music shouldbe played during the break or not．The opinions are divided．
       Most of the students think that music should beplayed．As we know，music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere．（高分句型一） Besides，after hard study，music can bring us relaxation，which reduces the tiredness．（高分句型二）This can help us make full preparations for the next class．Listening to musicalso makes us feel happy．On the other hand，some students don't thinkso．In their opinion，they can't get the expected effect from playing music，for the class break time is too short．What is needed most during the classbreak is peace instead of noise produced by music．（高分句型三）
       In my opinion，it is good to play some soft andpeaceful music instead of loud music during the class break．In this waystudents can enjoy music as well as have a good rest．Besides，I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students．（高分句型四）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．