假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam，

My name is Li Hua. I am writing to apply to be volunteer to take care of our school flowers and trees during the winter vacation.I believe this job suits me perfect.

On the one hand, that I am fond of is growing flowers and I have the experience to look after the flowers and trees well. On the another hand, it is not far from my home to our school. However I have enough time to work, which was a great advantage over other students. I’m convincing that as a volunteer I can do the job more better.

Thank you very much for read my application. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully,

1.文中第二句 volunteer 前加a

2.文中第二句后半句 school改为 school's

3.文中第三句 perfect改为perfectly.

4.文中第四句 that改为what

5.文中第五句 another 改为other

6.文中第六句 however改为Therefore

7.文中第六句 was改为is

8.文中第七句 convincing改为convinced

9.文中第七句去掉more

10.文中第八句 read改为reading

【解析】

1. volunteer前加a。Volunteer志愿者，名词。名词前加冠词a表示一个…。结合题意李华是要成为一名、并且只能成为一名志愿者。所以要加a

2. school改为 school's。表示有生命的东西的名词及某些表示时间、距离、星球、世界、国家等无生命的东西的名词后加 ’s来表示所有关系，叫做名词所有格。School是没有生命的，所以表示所有关系的时候要加’s.

3. perfect改为perfectly。形容词不能形容动词，而副词主要用来修饰动词,形容词,副词或其他结构，位置在be动词、助动词或情态动词之后，实义动词之前。如果实义动词后有宾语，则放于宾语之后。实意动词suit后面有宾语me所以perfectly放在me后面。

4. that改为what。考察主语从句。That引导主语从句时候后跟一个完整的句子做主语，而what是在主语从句中做动词的宾语。主语从句只有在不缺少主语,宾语或表语时,用that 引导。

5. another 改为other。考察固定结构on one hand…on the other had。通常用来说明两个方面。不能用another来替换。

6. however改为Therefore。结合语境来看，该句此处应该是顺承关系而不是转折关系，故将however改为therefore

7. was改为is。文章的基本时态是一般现在时不是一般过去式，所以要将was改为is。该句意思为：因此我有足够的时间去工作，这是我于其他学生的最大优势。

8. convincing改为convinced。固定结构有be convinced +that从句。这里用过去分词表示被动，表示“我”是被说服的。

9. 去掉more。考察比较级。Good的比较级是better，不需要在前面加more。该句意思为：我认为成为一名志愿者，我能把工作做得更好。

10. read改为reading。考察固定结构。Thank you very much for +doing sth，这个结构中for是介词。该句意思为：非常感谢您阅读我的申请。

考点：考察固定结构、时态等。

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1．讲座目的：使学生对美国电影有所了解；

2．讲座内容：简要介绍美国电影(制片)业的历史；

3．讲座时间：1小时30分钟左右。

注意：

1．可以适当增加细节，使结构完整；

2．词数：100左右。

Dear Peter，

________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

Perhaps you have heard a lot about the Internet，but what is it?

The Internet is many different networks around the world. A network is a group of computers put together. These networks joined together are called the Internet．

Maybe that doesn’t sound interesting. But when we’ve joined the Internet, there are lots of things we can do．We can find lots of interesting information on the World Wide Web(www)．We can use the Internet instead of a library to find all kinds of information for our homework. We can find information about our favourite sports or film stars and do shopping on the Inter-net. We can also send messages to other people by e-mail. It is much cheaper and quicker than calling our friends or sending a letter.

Thanks to the Internet, the world is becoming smaller and smaller. People can now work at home with a computer in front of them, getting and sending the information they need. They can buy or sell whatever they want by the Internet. But do you know 98％of the information is in English? So what will English be like tomorrow?

1.The passage is mainly about________.

A．the Internet B．information

C．computers D．e mail

2.The quickest and cheapest way for people to send messages to their friends is________．

A．by post B．by e mail C．by telephone D．by TV

3.The Internet cannot be used to__________.

A．find information for our homework

B．get some information about our favourite sports stars

C．do some shopping

D．do our housework

4..Which of the following is NOT true?

A．The Internet is a big computer．

B．The Internet is lots of computer networks．

C．The Internet is very helpful．

D．People can work at home with the help of the Internet．

5.What does the writer try to tell us with the last two sentences?

A．The Internet is more and more popular．

B．All the information is in English．

C．English is important in using the Internet．

D．Every computer must join the Internet．

——I’m sorry, Mrs. Smith, I have dirtied your papers.

—— .

A．That’s right B．Bad luck

C．You can forget it D．Sorry

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I met Moira when I was 11 at an Irish music party. Moira hosted the party that night, playing the violin, singing and dancing. She made sure that everyone in the room got involved and had a great time. I immediately fell in love with the music she played and the energy that she brought to it. Just a few days after that party, I took my first lesson with Moira, and I continued taking lessons with Moira throughout middle school.

When I started playing the violin with Moira, playing music became something that I loved. She introduced me to so many types of music, from Irish to Old Time, to Cajun. Moira also taught me to play the guitar. Soon we started performing together and were shocked to discover that people actually wanted to hear us! When I began to play the violin, practicing was something that I did at home in my living room, but with Moira’s influence it quickly became something that I did everywhere. I played on street corners, at festivals, at the beach, at parties, at weddings, and late at night in my friends’ kitchens.

Moira took the music out to the classroom and brought it to life. Her passion(激情)was not only for playing music, but also for sharing it. My time with Moira allowed me to grow both musically and personally. I have met so many special people and had so many invaluable(无价的) experiences. Moira has proven to be the most important influence in my musical development, and also my invaluable friend.

1. Which of the following statements is TRUE according to the passage?

A. The writer had her violin lessons every day.

B. The writer disliked the kids who hated the violin.

C. The writer usually played music in school concerts.

D. At first the writer was not active in learning the violin.

2.The passage didn’t say directly but we can learn that .

A. Moira was a good neighbor

B. the writer was a good singer

C. Moira was a good organizer

D. the writer was a music teacher

3.What can we know from the last paragraph?

A. Moira didn’t like to play music in the classroom.

B. Moira helped the writer a lot with her personal life.

C. Moira had great influence on the writer’s life

D. Moira was very thankful for the writer’s support.

4.What would be the best title for the passage?

A. My Way to Success. B. My Invaluable Friend.

C. My Middle School Life. D. How I learned the Violin.

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The Making Caring Common Project at Harvard’s Graduate School of Education surveyed 10,000 middle and high school students about which is more important to them—achievement, happiness, or caring about others. Almost 80 percent of students placed achievement or happiness over caring about others. Only 20 percent of students considered caring about others as their top aim.

In the study “The Children We Mean to Raise: The Real Message Adults Are Sending about Values”, the authors refer to a reality gap, an incongruity (不一致) between what adults tell children they should value and the message we grown-ups actually send through our behavior.

Simply talking about sympathy is not enough. While 96 percent of parents say they want to raise caring children, and cite the development of moral character as “very important, if not essential”, 80 percent of the youths surveyed reported that their parents “are more concerned about achievement and happiness than caring about others”. Approximately the same percentage of the students reported that their teachers put their achievement over caring.

As the report shows, simply talking about sympathy is not enough. Children are sensitive creatures, fully capable of telling the true meanings in the blank spaces between well-organised words. If parents really want to let their kids know that they value care and sympathy, the authors suggest, they must make a real effort to help their children learn to care about other people—even when it’s hard, even when it does not make them happy, and yes, even when it is at odds with their personal success.

1.The first paragraph suggests that parents _____.

A. value achievement less

B. fail to make students realize the importance of sympathy

C. don’t intend to value success

D. regard achievement and happiness as the same

2.What can be concluded from the study?

A. 20% of the students are not ambitious.

B. Kids care more about achievement.

C. About 80% of the students are not caring.

D. A majority of the kids are kind students.

3.What may be the cause for the reality gap?

A. Children’s failure to understand parents’ well-organised words.

B. The generation gap between parents and children.

C. Children’s desire for getting individual achievement.

D. Parents’ lack of a real effort to guide children.

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“Here in 2012, $252 on average–the technology spend for consumers this year.” From tablet computers to smart phones, American shoppers have been lining up to get the newest and coolest electronic devices on the market. There are more choices today than ever before. “It’s kind of hard to make a decision.”

Tablet computers are one of the best-selling products this year. Brian Tong is Senior Editor of CNET.com. The website reports on tech news and examines the latest electronic products. He says the Apple iPad Mini is one of the most popular tablets. Its starting price is $329. One of Apple’s biggest competitors is the Google Nexus 7. It starts at $199.

“The hardware inside is more powerful than what’s in the iPad Mini, but also it offers you a lot of things like maps that work better than Apple’s maps.” Brian Tong says there is one reason why people may like the iPad Mini more than the Nexus 7. “If you just want to read books and surf the Internet, you don’t really need to get an iPad Mini, but if you want the largest group of apps that’s where the iPad and Apple’s ecosystem shines the most.”

Elman Chacon is with the electronics store Best Buy. He says another hot product this season is smart cameras. They connect to the Internet through Wi-Fi. This makes it easy for users to email or upload photographs directly from the camera. “You can literally take a picture, upload it into your Facebook in a matter of seconds. These things are pretty cool because they do a lot of things.”

Streaming media boxes also connect to the Internet. People are able to watch web content such as movies and YouTube videos on their televisions. Another popular item is wireless speaker systems. The newest ones work with any device that has Bluetooth technology, including smart phones, laptops and tablets.

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“We have something called the perfect match promise which means if you buy a certain device and you find it cheaper within 30 days we’ll go ahead and price match that for you.” Elman Chacon said.

1.According to Brain Tong, ________.

A. the Apple’s iPad Mini is more suitable for enthusiastic readers

B. the hardware in iPad Mini is more advanced than that in Nexus 7

C. iPad Mini is more eco-friendly

D. Nexus 7 has fewer apps than iPad Mini

2.If you’ve discovered that a certain device you bought at Best Buy is more expensive than one at another store, ________.

A. you are sure to get double the amount you paid

B. the store will return the price differences

C. you can return the device and get your money back

D. the store will lower the price within 30 days

3.Which of the following would be the best gift for a cab driver?

A. Smart cameras. B. Streaming media boxes.

C. Tablet computers. D.Wireless speaker systems.

4.What is true about the smart cameras ?

A. To show the varieties of products

B. The smart cameras are more powerful.

C.It can make the users upload their photographs easily .

D. The smart cameras makes it more convenient to go on Internet .

5.From the passage , we can infer _______ .

A. Electronics have become one of the biggest consumer industries in the US.

B. There are many electronics in the United States .

C. The US becomes the Number One electronics consumers .

D. We can buy much cheaper products in US .

Green invaders are taking over America. Not invaders from space, but plants! You might not think of plants as dangerous, but in this case they are threatening nature’s delicate food chain.

The invaders are plants brought here from other countries to make gardens and yards look pretty. Ever since people started to arrive on America’s shores, they have carried along trees, flowers, and vegetables from other places. Now there are so many of those plants, they are crowding out the native plants that have lived here since before human settlers arrived.

And that’s a problem, says Dr. Doug Tallamy. He’s insect expert at the University of Delaware. He explains that almost all the plant-eating insects in the United States are specialized, which means they eat only certain plants. Monarch butterfly caterpillars(幼虫),for example, dine on milkweed. If people cut down milkweed and replace it with another plant, the butterflies will not have the food source that they need to survive.

But the trouble doesn’t stop there. When insects can’t get the right plants to eat and they die off, then the birds don’t have enough bugs for their meals. Tallamy points out that almost all migrating birds depend on insets to feed their young.

“We cannot let the plants and animals around us disappear.” says Tallamy, “The way to preserve them is to give them food to eat. But when we plant non-native plants, we are clobbering the food chain, because then we don’t have the insects the birds need to live.”

Fewer of the right plants mean fewer bugs, and fewer bugs mean fewer birds. And that’s bad for the Earth, because we need a variety of living things to keep the planet healthy and beautiful.

The good news is, garden centers sell native plants. “Just Google ‘native plants’ and your location, and you can find out which plants really belong where you live,” says Tallamy

1.How did green invades arrive at America?

A.They fell down from space.

B.They floated to the America’s shores.

C.They were brought in from foreign countries

D.They has lived here since human settlers arrived

2.According to Dr.Tallamy, which of the followings about the insects in the US is NOT true?

A.Almost all the plant-eating insects in a place eat certain plants.

B.Monarch butterfly caterpillars can’t survive without milkweed.

C.If insects can’t eat the right plants, they will find another one.

D.The insects’ death will greatly affect the migrating birds’ survival

3.The underlined word “clobber” in Paragraph 5 is closest in meaning to _________.

A.protect B. damage C. create D. collect

4.We can know whether a plant is native by _________.

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5.What is the best title of the pass age?

A.Green invaders——local living things

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C.Green invaders——environmental protectors

D. Green invades——threat to local nature

请根据下文的提示，写一篇介绍“中国结”的说明文。

称谓	中国结，一种独具特色的中国民间手工艺装饰品
历史	起源于远古时期，唐宋时期得以发展，明清时代就像今天这样盛兴
现状	品种繁多，由红色丝线、布匹和其它原料做成因其形状、用途和起源的不同而命名作为礼物送给朋友或悬挂在自己的房屋内
意义	代表和平、友谊、爱情、好运等

参考词汇：中国结 Chinese knot 手工艺品 handicraft art 丝线 silk thread

【写作内容】请根据以上表格中的信息用英语写一篇短文介绍中国结。

【写作要求】用100词左右表达全部内容。

【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

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