Question

3．假定你是李华，你的美国网友Tom因身材瘦小经常受到同学们的欺凌（bully），这令他感到非常苦恼．请你用英语给他写封邮件，主要内容包括：
1．表示安慰；
2．进行劝解；
3．给出建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
I'm worried about your being bullied by your classmates．I believe everything will be better for you．I also hope you could be optimistic about your life and become the boy who is confident and happy．After all，it isn't your fault．You don't need to feel distressed because of others'behavior．I think it's time for you to make a change．There are some suggestions I want to share with you．
Firstly，you can make yourself stronger with knowledge．As a saying goes，"Knowledge is power．"Secondly，you should talk to your teacher to ask for help．Last but not least，you'd better take part in some events you feel interested in to open your mind and get more chances to get along with your classmates．I hope my advice can help you．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于校园欺凌的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表示安慰并进行劝解；二给出建议．
高分句型：
1．I also hope you could be optimistic about your life and become the boy who is confident and happy．句子里be optimistic about 表示"对…乐观"；who 引导定语从句，代指先行词 the boy．
我也希望你能乐观面对生活，成为一个快乐自信的孩子．
2．Last but not least，you'd better take part in some events you feel interested in to open your mind and get more chances to get along with your classmates．句子里Last but not least表示"最后，但也是重要的"； you feel interested in 是定语从句，修饰先行词some events，省略了关系词；get along with 表示"与某人相处"．
最后，但也是重要的是，你最好参加一些你感兴趣的活动，这样你就会开拓思维，有更多的机会和同学相处．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Tom，
        I'm worried about your being bullied by your classmates．I believe everything will be better for you．I also hope you could be optimistic about your life and become the boy who is confident and happy．【高分句型一】After all，it isn't your fault．You don't need to feel distressed because of others'behavior．I think it's time for you to make a change．There are some suggestions I want to share with you．（表示安慰并进行劝解）
Firstly，you can make yourself stronger with knowledge．As a saying goes，"Knowledge is power．"Secondly，you should talk to your teacher to ask for help．Last but not least，you'd better take part in some events you feel interested in to open your mind and get more chances to get along with your classmates．【高分句型二】I hope my advice can help you．（给出建议）
Best wishes．
    Yours，
    Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
要点提示是提纲类作文的特点，是用汉语给出一段短 文提示，要求根据提示写一篇100词左右的 短文，所考查的形式灵活多样，如人物介 绍、地点介绍等．这 是比较常见的一种写作方式，写作时要首先根据要点确定文章的中心思 想，然后围绕中心思想和要点展开叙述．