Question

【题目】假设你是李华，上周你和家人一同到伦敦旅游，期间住宿在Sunshine 宾馆，该宾馆的设施与服务令你们非常满意。请根据以下要点提示用英语给旅馆写一封感谢信：

1.表示感谢；

2.解释原因；

3.表达下次再来的意愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir / Madam,

I am a Chinese student and my name is Li Hua. Last week, I went to London and visited many places of interest with my family. During my visit, I stayed at your hotel for five days. Your hotel is well furnished and the service is quite good. And everything in your hotel is labeled in both English and Chinese, which is quite convenient for Chinese visitors. I was deeply touched by this. Thank you for your good service. If I go to London again, I will certainly stay at your hotel again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求用英语给旅馆写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：1.表示感谢；2.解释原因；3.表达下次再来的意愿。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了高级词汇I was deeply touched by this.（be touched by）和定语从句which is quite convenient for Chinese visitors.等。