题目内容
【题目】假如你是新华中学的学生李华,刚参加完“美国高校一周游”的夏令营活动,在离开之前,你想给新结交的美国朋友Monica写一封感谢信,内容应包括以下要点:
1.表示感谢;
2.描述参加比次夏令营的收获;
3.邀请她参加明年在中国的夏令营。
注意:1.可适当添加细节使文章连贯;字数:120-150.
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your company while I was on this summer camp, which was an unforgettable experience for me and I also benefited a lot from it.
Through visiting American universities, I got a good knowledge of American universities-tourist attractions in some way, which broadened my horizon and introduced me to more about American culture. Besides, during the summer camp, I made some American friends, just like you, who gave me lots of assistance. Moreover, in an environment exposed to English language, my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly.
PS: Would you like to join the summer camp in China next summer? I'll be you best guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture, and enjoy tasty Chinese food, etc. I'm looking forward to your coming.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是半开放性作文。在第二点上可以适当发挥(描述参加此次夏令营的收获)。半开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
亮点说明:范文的高级句式的运用较好,如非限制性定语从句which was an unforgettable experience for me and I also benefited a lot from it;以及who gave me lots of assistance.另外串联词的使用也很合理,如Besides等。