Question

11．随着微博的普及，许多行业精英或公众人物通过微博发布消息和表达观点，给社会带来 不同影响．现在，请你用英语就此写篇简评，内容包括：
1．上述情况日趋普遍；
2．这种做法的利与弊；
3．微博是否应受到监管？为什么？
注意：1．词数：120字左右；
2．参考词汇：微博 micro-blogs n （pl．）
行业精英 industry elites n．（pl）
Micro-blogs，a new format of communication，are becoming more and more popular．Many industry elites or public figures post news or express ideas through micro-blogs，which has produced different impacts on society．Generally speaking，most of them use micro-blogs to convey positive messages to the public．For example，they encourage people to help those who badly need help．However，some of them behave differently．Sometimes their micro-blogs are full of dirty words，gossip or rumors，which has a bad effect on the people around them．Therefore，any improper message posted there should be deleted by the website operators and that's their duty，I think，for micro-blogs are just like a real world，where everybody should obey the laws and the moral codes，and no absolute freedom should exist there at all．Only in this way can people tell right from wrong without misled．

Answer 1

分析 亮点句型一：Many industry elites or public figures post news or express ideas through micro-blogs，which has produced different impacts on society许多行业精英或公众人物通过信息发布新闻或表达思想，这对社会产生不同的影响．此处which引导的非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整个句子的意思．
亮点句型二：Only in this way can people tell right from wrong without misled．本句是一个倒装句，only引导的状语至于句首，主句要做部分倒装．

解答 Micro-blogs，a new format of communication，are becoming more and more popular．Many industry elites or public figures post news or express ideas through micro-blogs，which has produced different impacts on society（亮点句型一）．【阐明现象】Generally speaking，most of them use micro-blogs to convey positive messages to the public．For  example，they encourage people to help those who badly need help．However，some of them behave differently．Sometimes their micro-blogs are full of dirty words，gossip or rumors，which has a bad effect on the people around them．Therefore，any improper message posted there should be deleted by the website operators and that's their duty．【现象的利与弊】I think，for micro-blogs are just like a real world，where everybody should obey the laws and the moral codes，and no absolute freedom should exist there at all．Only in this way can people tell right from wrong without misled．（亮点句型二）【阐述观点】

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．