题目内容
【题目】很定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了-些问题以至学习低效。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Charlie写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.写信意图;
2.存在问题;
3.希望得到帮助。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
Dear Charlie,
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【答案】Dear Charlie,
I am Ii Hua, a Senior 3 student. Lately, I’ve been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unluckily I find it quite hard to be concentrated. So I’m writing to you for guidance.
I’m faced with some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down, What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to enjoy a sound sleep every night.
I wonder if you can help me with those difficulties. Your precious advice will be much appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,因为高考紧张复习,导致遇到了一些问题以至学习低效,要求考生给你校的外籍心理老师Charlie写一封求助信寻求帮助。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
结构:三段式。
第一段:提出写信意图;
第二段:存在的问题;
第三段:希望得到帮助。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
prepare for, guidance,face with,moreover,let down,I wonder if…,
第三步:连词成句
1. So I’m writing to you for guidance.
2. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.
3. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down
4. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to enjoy a sound sleep every night.
5. Your precious advice will be much appreciated.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改