题目内容
16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改句子，请你修改你同桌写的以下句子．每句中有一处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词． 删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词．
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
I have received and read your letter，in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting．It is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beautiful．And in my opinion，health is more important than beauty．Do not let others'ideas to affect your normal life．However，if you do want to lose weight，it is good idea to do it by taking more exercise．The most important thing is that you keep up a health state of mind．And it will help you on your studies and help us get over difficulties on dieting．I hope my advices will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to hear from you soon．
分析 本文主要是作者对对方偏胖想节食减肥的一些建议．作者认为：首先，健康比漂亮重要，不要让别人的想法影响自己的生活；其次，学生以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌；其三，可通过多锻炼身体保持健康，也要改变不良的饮食习惯．
解答 I have received and read your letter，in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting．It is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beautiful．And in my opinion，health is more important than beauty．Do not let others'ideas to affect your normal life．However，if you do want to lose weight，it is∧good idea to do it by taking more exercise．The most important thing is that you keep up a health state of mind．And it will help you on your studies and help us get over difficulties on dieting．I hope my advices will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to hear from you soon．
详解：
1．want改为wanted 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
2．hopes改为hope 考查虚拟语气．natural后接从句时要用虚拟语气，即从句中谓语动词用"should+动词原形"结构，其中should可以省略．
3．And改为But 考查连词．前后两个分句之意是转折关系而非并列关系，用连词but．
4．去掉to 考查动词不定式．let后接动词时用不带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语．
5．加a 老板冠词． idea是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
6．health改为healthy 考查形容词．state是名词，要用形容词修饰作定语．
7．on改为with 考查介词．help…with意为"帮助（某人）做（某事）"，是固定搭配．
8．us改为you 考查代词．根据下文语境，此处you指代对方，用代词you．
9．advices改为advice 考查名词．advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
10．hear改为hearing 考查动名词．from是介词，后接动词时动名词形式．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
