Question

【题目】请你代表高二学生给外教Jeff写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.邀请他参加高二年级的成人仪式；

2.请他做简短发言；

3.时间：3月30日（周一）下午3:30；

4.地点：学校礼堂。

注意：1.词数不少于50。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：成人仪式the Coming-of-age ceremony

Dear Jeff,

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Jeff,

How is everything going?You know, we are going to be 18, which means a new chapter to us. To celebrate this significant moment, we will hold the Coming-of-age ceremony in our lecture hall at 3:30 pm on March 30th. As one of the most popular teachers in our school life, you are more than welcome to witness the wonderful occasion. If you can give a short speech then, it will be our great honor. Looking forward to seeing you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是邀请信，把题目的信息叙述清楚，并能够表达邀请活动的主题。

1.注意重要信息，时间地点，参与人员，参与活动。

2.写清邀请Jeff老师作简短发言，如我们邀请您为成人礼准备小段发言。

3.写清要求对方参加活动的理由，如成人礼对学生来说很有意义，希望Jeff老师和同学一起纪念这个节日。

4.注意邀请信的常用句型，“I’m writing to tell you…I wonder if you’d like to join us.”，“If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information…”，“Hope to meet you at…”