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【题目】书面表达

随着网络在人们生活中的广泛使用，在生日或其他重大节日时，越来越多的好友或家人喜欢通过发送电子贺卡来表达他们的祝愿。根据以下提示，简述使用电子贺卡的优点，并谈谈自己的看法。

1. 使用便捷，传递速度快，不受时空限制；

2. 形式多样，生动有趣；

3. 节约资源，利于环保。

文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，字数100左右。

参考词汇：电子贺卡：e-card (electronic card)

Answer 1

【答案】

With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life, more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals.

Compared with paper cards, electronic ones have many advantages. Firstly, it's more convenient and quicker to send and receive them as well, without being limited by time and space. Secondly, they take various forms of motion pictures, music and so on, which is more interesting and lively. Most importantly, electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources.

For me, due to reminders from QQ, I've never missed any chances to say "Happy birthday" to my friends and grandparents far away via electronic cards. I have to say it is just the Internet that is making my life more colorful and comfortable.

【解析】

试题分析：随着网络在人们生活中的广泛使用，在生日或其他重大节日时，越来越多的好友或家人喜欢通过发送电子贺卡来表达他们的祝愿。根据以下提示，简述使用电子贺卡的优点，并谈谈自己的看法。1.使用便捷，传递速度快，不受时空限制；2.形式多样，生动有趣；3.节约资源，利于环保。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】Compared with paper cards, electronic ones have many advantages.运用非谓语动词；Firstly, it's more convenient and quicker to send and receive them as well, without being limited by time and space. 运用比较级； I have to say it is just the Internet that is making my life more colorful and comfortable.

运用固定句式；With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life, more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals.与Most importantly, electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。