题目内容
6.一个英文网站面向中学生征稿.请你写一篇英文稿件,介绍"中秋节"及这个节日里的主要活动.写作要点:
1.它是中国传统节日之一;
2.家人团聚;
3.赏月、吃月饼、
4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动.
5.…
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使用文连贯;
3.开头语已您写好,不讲总词数.
参考词汇:中秋节:the Mid-Autumn Festival农历:lunar calendar
赏月:enjoy the full moon月饼:moon cake
The Mid-Autumn Fetival
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分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,写一篇英文稿件,介绍"中秋节"及这个节日里的主要活动.
写作时人称以第一和第二人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主.
写作要点:1.它是中国传统节日之一; 2.家人团聚;3.赏月、吃月饼;4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动.
重要短语:fall on(降临),lunar calendar(阴历),the traditional Chinese festivals(中国传统的节日),enjoy great popularity (受欢迎),try to do sth(努力做某事),for celebration (为了庆祝),enjoy the full moon (赏月满月),share sth with sb(与某人分享某物),in addition to(除…之外还),traditional activities(传统的活动),have a wide range of choices(各种各样的选择),visit relatives or friends(拜访亲戚朋友).
【高分句型一】
1.Usually,no matter how far away or how busy we are,we will try to come home for celebration.
此处是由"no matter how+形容词+主语+谓语"引导的让步状语从句,可以理解为"however far away or however busy we are",主句为"we will try to come home for celebration".
【高分句型二】
2.①What we love most is the time②when we enjoy the full moon together.
①此处是由"what"引导的主语从句,句子的谓语动词为"is",表语为"the time we enjoy the full moon together".
②此处关系副词"when"引导的定语从句,先行词为"the time",定语从句中不缺少主、宾、表等主要成分.
【高分句型三】
3.①With the beautiful noon up in the sky,we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit,②sharing our stories.
①此处是"with复合结构"作状语,结构为"with+宾语+宾补",主语为"we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit,sharing our stories".
②此处是现在分词"sharing our stories"作伴随状语,主句为"we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit"
解答 The Mid-Autumn Fetival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.
As one of the traditional Chinese festivals,it has been enjoying great popularity in our country.(它是中国传统节日之一) Usually,no matter how far away or how busy we are,we will try to come home for celebration.【高分句型一】(家人团聚)The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month.What we love most is the time when we enjoy the full moon together.【高分句型二】With the beautiful noon up in the sky,we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit,sharing our stories.【高分句型三】(赏月、吃月饼)In addition to these traditional activities,we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.(还有旅游、访友等其他活动)
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.
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