题目内容
7.假设你是高二学生李华,你的英国笔友Mike来信说他准备戒烟.请你限据以下内容提示给他回信.1)给与肯定和鼓励;
2)推荐可行的戒烟方法(如:列出戒烟的好处;干家务、与朋友聊天来忘掉抽烟;参加戒烟俱乐部等等);
3)表达你的祝愿.
注意:
1)词数100左右.
2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3)开头结尾已经给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Mike,
I was delighted to hear from you,knowing that
.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给准备戒烟的英国笔友Mike回信,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:给予肯定和鼓励;推荐可行的戒烟方法(如:列出戒烟的好处;干家务、与朋友聊天来忘掉抽烟;参加戒烟俱乐部等等);表达你的祝愿.我们此篇作文分为三部分,第一部分为给予肯定和鼓励.第二部分为推荐可行的戒烟方法.第三部分为表达美好祝愿.
重点短语与句型:
be delighted to do sth 高兴去做某事
decide to do sth 决定做某事
make up one's mind to do sth下定决心做某事
feel like doing sth 想要做某事
高分句型一:I was delighted to hear from you,knowing that you have decided to stop smoking.此句用了现在分词knowing作伴随状语
高分句型二:Whatever happens,just believe that you will succeed eventually.此句用了Whatever引导让步状语从句
解答 Dear Mike,
I was delighted to hear from you,knowing that you have decided to stop smoking(高分句型一).As you're always a strong-minded guy,I'm sure you can manage it once you make up your mind.(给予肯定和鼓励)
I'm sending you some advice that might help.First of all,prepare yourself.Throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all the benefits you will get from stopping smoking.Secondly,be determined.Every time you feel like smoking a cigarette,remind yourself that you are a non-smoker.Thirdly,get help if necessary.Joining a stop-smoking group and talking to friends or doctors are good ideas.Whatever happens,just believe that you will succeed eventually.(高分句型二 )(推荐可行的戒烟方法)
I'm looking forward to your good news.(表达美好祝愿)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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