题目内容
15.你是一个遇事总爱抱怨的人吗?你是不是总会为自己的失败找寻借口?如果是这样,那么你应该立刻停止抱怨,开始为自己的生活负责任.因为一个成功的人首先一定是一个敢于负责任的人.请以"Take Responsibility for Your life"为题,写一篇120词左右的短文.短文必须包含如下3个部分:
1.负责任的好处
2.逃避责任的坏处
3.呼吁读者作出正确的选择
关键词:责任responsibility 抱怨 complain 借口excuse
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分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们以"Take Responsibility for Your life"为题,写一篇120词左右的短文,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:负责任的好处,逃避责任的坏处,呼吁读者作出正确的选择.我们此篇作文分为三部分,第一部分为引出话题,第二部分为负责任的好处以及逃避责任的坏处.第三部分为呼吁读者作出正确的选择.
重点短语与句型:
blame sb.for sth.因某事责备某人…
miss the deadlines 错过截止日期
take responsibility for为…负责
In contrast对比,比较
高分句型一:Are you always blaming others for things that don't go exactly the way you want?.此句用了that引导定语从句
高分句型二:Only by taking responsibility can you take a clearer look at yourself,set more achievable goals,and make more detailed plans此句only+介词短语,主句部分倒装
解答 Take Responsibility for Your Life
Are you always blaming others for things that don't go exactly the way you want?高分句型一 Are you making excuses for goals unmet or tasks that missed your deadlines?If that is what you are,stop it,and start to take responsibility for your life.引出话题
Taking responsibility does a lot of good to your life.Only by taking responsibility can you take a clearer look at yourself,set more achievable goals,and make more detailed plans高分句型二.Those who are responsible for their lives are always ready to put their thoughts into action and thus good consequences are most likely to follow.In contrast,avoiding responsibility will block your way of going ahead.Those who like seeking excuses tend to waste their time on unnecessary complaints and miss the essential part of the matter they are dealing with.So great success is never expected to visit such individuals.负责任的好处以及逃避责任的坏处
Taking responsibility is actually just a matter of decision,and it's you yourself and no one else who can make it for you.Please go into action right here,right now and take responsibility for your life.呼吁读者作出正确的选择
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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