Question

14．假设你是新华中学高一新生李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信询问你的近况，请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：
  1．你对高中生活的感受及打算；
  2．简要介绍一位你在新学校认识的新朋友；
  3．谈谈你对朋友或友谊的理解．
注意：1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
   I'm writing to tell you something about my new school life．At first，I find it a little difficult to get used to the senior school life．The subjects we are learning are obvio usly more difficult．Besides，with endless homework to do，we almost have no time for exercise and other activities．I feel greatly stressed but I'm determined to go through all the difficulties and learn every subject well．（高分句型一）（感受及打算）
Fortunately，the teachers and classmates are all helpful and kind．And I'm glad to make a new friend-Wang Lin，who is very outgoing and always ready to help others．（高分句型二）（认识的新朋友）It was with his help that I overcame my fear or maths and made great progress．（高分句型三）I thinks friends should always help and encourage each other．（对朋友或友谊的理解）
How about your school life？I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息用英语给他写一封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：你对高中生活的感受及打算；简要介绍一位你在新学校认识的新朋友；谈谈你对朋友或友谊的理解．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：恰当的过渡词，如At first首先；Besides另外；  Fortunately幸运的是；   一些固定短语，如get used to 习惯于；make progress取得进步；look forward to盼望
I feel greatly stressed but I'm determined to go through all the difficulties and learn every subject well．（高分句型一）
And I'm glad to make a new friend-Wang Lin，who is very outgoing and always ready to help others．（高分句型二）
It was with his help that I overcame my fear or maths and made great progress．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm writing to tell you something about my new school life．At first，I find it a little difficult to get used to the senior school life．The subjects we are learning are obvio usly more difficult．Besides，with endless homework to do，we almost have no time for exercise and other activities．I feel greatly stressed but I'm determined to go through all the difficulties and learn every subject well．（高分句型一）（感受及打算）
      Fortunately，the teachers and classmates are all helpful and kind．And I'm glad to make a new friend-Wang Lin，who is very outgoing and always ready to help others．（高分句型二）（认识的新朋友）It was with his help that I overcame my fear or maths and made great progress．（高分句型三）I thinks friends should always help and encourage each other．（对朋友或友谊的理解）
      How about your school life？I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．